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Before she’s old

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lucky
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0 posted 04-02-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

Before she’s old

Purple iris edge the creek
right along where lyrics well come as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?


 

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 04-02-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Lucky, this speaks tenderly of the thrill and bliss of innocence caught suddenly off guard by the solemn discovery of the cycle of life. Wonderful writing...very evocative, to my way of thinking.

~ Claire
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 04-02-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~
I would say that your muse is very busy
flooding you with these beautiful thoughts
and lines.
This is just so soft and lovely.
Your writing is on a plane of ascent.
Soaring !
I'm glad we get a chance to be passengers
to your flights of fancy.
~*Marge*~



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Parker
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... the old black rum


3 posted 04-02-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

lucky, ....... what they said and I loved it.

Parker
Martie
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4 posted 04-02-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sparkling in this time that seeks each day for beginnings, the small death of eternal lies hidden and waiting for us out from the corner of an eye.  I love your poetry lucky!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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5 posted 04-03-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

"Purple iris edge the creek" - lucky, you have a way about titles, and beginning lines that catch and drag me in.  This could be the story of my life, and, my dear, I know it could be that a bit of that was in your mind.  I just have to tell you I love this poem.  And I love you.

 
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