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Joannak
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0 posted 2000-04-02 12:25 PM


Your eyes, flashing fire,
Incendiary passions,
Anticipation.


jk


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-02 12:44 PM


Joanna~
This is very well done.
I've been consumed by
the beauty of Haiku.
The simplicity of the
words that paint the picture
is quite an experience, isn't it?
Enjoyed much.
~*Marge*~


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INclan
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2 posted 2000-04-02 08:27 AM


anticipation
incendiary passions
J'teme, mon amour


Joanna,
You inspired me...I could not resist.
INclan

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-04-02 09:11 AM


I just happen to love Haiku  
Joannak
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4 posted 2000-04-02 08:25 PM


Thank you, Marge, I also love the simplicity of haiku.

Thanks, Ruth, I just recently began writing haiku, and now I am consumed with it.

INclan, I am pleased that I could inspire such as yourself.  I also love the French language, such a romantic tongue...

Joanna

 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

Denise
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5 posted 2000-04-02 10:18 PM


Very lovely, Joannak!

Denise

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