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Joannak
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Your eyes, flashing fire,
Incendiary passions,
Anticipation.


jk

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Joanna~
This is very well done.
I've been consumed by
the beauty of Haiku.
The simplicity of the
words that paint the picture
is quite an experience, isn't it?
Enjoyed much.
~*Marge*~


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anticipation
incendiary passions
J'teme, mon amour


Joanna,
You inspired me...I could not resist.
INclan
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I just happen to love Haiku  
Joannak
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Thank you, Marge, I also love the simplicity of haiku.

Thanks, Ruth, I just recently began writing haiku, and now I am consumed with it.

INclan, I am pleased that I could inspire such as yourself.  I also love the French language, such a romantic tongue...

Joanna

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Very lovely, Joannak!

Denise
 
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