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My Dog Lucky

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WhtDove
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My Dog Lucky


My dog, Lucky, quite the clown
She's all white with spots of brown
She has found new ways to play
Running with balloon today

Seems she jumped up, grabbed the string
It's new fun, it's now the thing
Wish I had some film with me
I could share this site to see

Kodak moment that's for sure
Round the table in a blur
With balloon trailing behind
I think Lucky's lost her mind

When it floats to the ceiling
It's then she gets this feeling
She jumps up and grabs the string
Downward the balloon she brings

String in teeth she's on the run
C'mon chase me, have some fun
Can you catch balloon or me
Dare ya, can ya, we'll see

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-02-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

how sweet it is to see your smiling face here tonight  ...and as always your poems make me smile...I can see you laughing and enjoying the simple pleasure of this moment.
take care dovey,
jm
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2 posted 04-02-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for snuffy   Email snuffy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snuffy

HI!
Such a natural poem, and happy..... exactly, we can see you smiling as you wrote it...
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3 posted 04-02-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

AWWWWWW! This is so cute, dovey! I can just see it happening before my eyes. Dogs are so much fun, aren't they? Thanks for sharing this...gives me a nice fuzzy feeling.  
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4 posted 04-02-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WhiteDove~
I love doggie stories.
My Toy Pomeranian would love
to cavort with Lucky !  
I can just see the whole scene.
Thanks for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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You've made me smile again, WhiteDove...Lucky is indeed, lucky.  I've a dog too.  Her name is Annabelladonnatellacinderella.
Believe me, she grew until the name fit.

Love to you and Lucky too!  Thanks.
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ROFL...I can picture every bit of this  
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 04-02-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lucky is a lucky dog
What a cute poem filled with Kodak moments
Liz
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8 posted 04-02-2000 09:08 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Rebecca, this is wonderful, hehe I can just see it  lol   loved it!

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9 posted 04-02-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Rebecca, This is great brought a smile to my face, I'm glad you found a subject that would let your creativity flow.  
WhtDove
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Thanks to each and everyone of you! I appreciate you sharing this moment with me.
It surprised me that she did that, but she's such a cutie with that balloon, string in teeth and runnin with it! I couldn't resisit.
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11 posted 04-02-2000 12:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hey! This is cute.... made me smile! Thanks.  
Nan
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LOL - What a picture this conjures up... Very cute...
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Brought smiles to me too Dove ....
How cute ...  
I have a yorkie named Sir Cedric of Stirling Lakes ... Cedric for short ...
Liz Santos, while visiting, wrote a real cute poem about Cedric doing his 'moonwalk'..... with her permission, I will post it ......
Our pets are cetainly an inspiration for some heartwarming poems .... =0)
I enjoyed this piece very much .....
Denise
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This is adorable, Rebecca!! hehehehe....thanks for the smiles!

Denise
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Sorry I was in a rush earlier with the replies...

Janet I was laughing really hard, it was quite the sight to see. thanks!

Snuffy thank you glad you enjoyed.

Balladeer they sure are! They do such nutty stuff at times. Gotta love em  

Marge, I wonder my dog would probably spend the whole time sniffin if ya know what I mean? haha...she's medium sized.

Serenity how'd you come up with a name like that? LOL  All rolled into one...
Mine lives up to her name that's for sure. She's been hit twice so far on a busy road right behind us, and come out with scrapes and bruises, no serious damage.  

LOL Ruth, it was fun.

Liz, just wish I'd had the film  

Thanks DA, glad you smiled  

LD, figures right after we talked about this, it would happen eh? LOL  

Devine anytime I can make you smile it's a pleasure  

Thanks so much Nan!

Pepper I'd love to see that poem. Moonwalk, anything like Michael Jackson does? hehee
Thanks much sweetie  

Denise thank you, I'm glad you get some smiles out of this too   HUGS
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16 posted 04-04-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

So... I'm a dog, wolf wolf. The string is dental floss. I'm a good dog, I never forget to brush.

 
WhtDove
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LOL Lucky....naw not you. I think that many times when I see Dove in the title of a poem  
Michael
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18 posted 04-05-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I like this, Rebecca.  It's amazing how much fun pets can be.  And they always seem to love the toys that don't cost anything...  Go spend 40 bucks at Pet Barn and they'll snub ya every time...LOL  Wad up a piece of paper...they'll play with ya all day.  Good poem.

Michael
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