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My Dog Lucky
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My Dog Lucky |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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My Dog Lucky My dog, Lucky, quite the clown She's all white with spots of brown She has found new ways to play Running with balloon today Seems she jumped up, grabbed the string It's new fun, it's now the thing Wish I had some film with me I could share this site to see Kodak moment that's for sure Round the table in a blur With balloon trailing behind I think Lucky's lost her mind When it floats to the ceiling It's then she gets this feeling She jumps up and grabs the string Downward the balloon she brings String in teeth she's on the run C'mon chase me, have some fun Can you catch balloon or me Dare ya, can ya, we'll see |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how sweet it is to see your smiling face here tonight  ...and as always your poems make me smile...I can see you laughing and enjoying the simple pleasure of this moment.take care dovey, jm |
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snuffy Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 19 |
HI! Such a natural poem, and happy..... exactly, we can see you smiling as you wrote it... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AWWWWWW! This is so cute, dovey! I can just see it happening before my eyes. Dogs are so much fun, aren't they? Thanks for sharing this...gives me a nice fuzzy feeling. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ I love doggie stories. My Toy Pomeranian would love to cavort with Lucky ! I can just see the whole scene. Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've made me smile again, WhiteDove...Lucky is indeed, lucky. I've a dog too. Her name is Annabelladonnatellacinderella. Believe me, she grew until the name fit. Love to you and Lucky too! Thanks. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL...I can picture every bit of this |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lucky is a lucky dog What a cute poem filled with Kodak moments Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rebecca, this is wonderful, hehe I can just see it lol loved it!What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Rebecca, This is great brought a smile to my face, I'm glad you found a subject that would let your creativity flow. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks to each and everyone of you! I appreciate you sharing this moment with me. It surprised me that she did that, but she's such a cutie with that balloon, string in teeth and runnin with it! I couldn't resisit. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hey! This is cute.... made me smile! Thanks.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - What a picture this conjures up... Very cute...  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Brought smiles to me too Dove .... How cute ... I have a yorkie named Sir Cedric of Stirling Lakes ... Cedric for short ... Liz Santos, while visiting, wrote a real cute poem about Cedric doing his 'moonwalk'..... with her permission, I will post it ...... Our pets are cetainly an inspiration for some heartwarming poems .... =0) I enjoyed this piece very much ..... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is adorable, Rebecca!! hehehehe....thanks for the smiles! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sorry I was in a rush earlier with the replies... Janet I was laughing really hard, it was quite the sight to see. thanks! Snuffy thank you glad you enjoyed. Balladeer they sure are! They do such nutty stuff at times. Gotta love em Marge, I wonder my dog would probably spend the whole time sniffin if ya know what I mean? haha...she's medium sized. Serenity how'd you come up with a name like that? LOL All rolled into one... Mine lives up to her name that's for sure. She's been hit twice so far on a busy road right behind us, and come out with scrapes and bruises, no serious damage. LOL Ruth, it was fun. Liz, just wish I'd had the film  Thanks DA, glad you smiled LD, figures right after we talked about this, it would happen eh? LOL Devine anytime I can make you smile it's a pleasure Thanks so much Nan! Pepper I'd love to see that poem. Moonwalk, anything like Michael Jackson does? hehee Thanks much sweetie Denise thank you, I'm glad you get some smiles out of this too HUGS |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
So... I'm a dog, wolf wolf. The string is dental floss. I'm a good dog, I never forget to brush. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Lucky....naw not you. I think that many times when I see Dove in the title of a poem |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I like this, Rebecca. It's amazing how much fun pets can be. And they always seem to love the toys that don't cost anything... Go spend 40 bucks at Pet Barn and they'll snub ya every time...LOL Wad up a piece of paper...they'll play with ya all day. Good poem. Michael |
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