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snuffy
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0 posted 04-01-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for snuffy   Email snuffy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snuffy


When will my prince charming come and take me?
When will he take me away from this place,
Away from the mess, from the loneliness..

When could that prince charming realize that I am ready for him,
Ready for him to take me into his arms, and steel me from this world that I live in.

When will he realize that I am looking for him, in a daily search of him…
Will he attend to me?  Will he even look at me?

Is he beautiful?
Is he passionate?
What is he?
Where is he?
When will he be he?

My prince charming, I command you to come,
To take my place, to live in me, within me….
Come, you are welcome here, always, all the time.
I am here for you, will be, have been, waiting…..

My prince charming…..
My death.

1/04/2000

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Severn
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1 posted 04-02-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I just love the ending on this! What a total surprise!

Powerful, solemn stuff here.

Welcome to Passions!

  


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life enriches writing'
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INclan
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2 posted 04-02-2000 08:41 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Welcome to Passions, Snuffy.  A good first posting. Yes, these are questions we all have had ourselves.  The fun is in finding the answers. Yes, the frustrations of waiting do enter in as well.

Well Done.

INclan
snuffy
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3 posted 04-02-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for snuffy   Email snuffy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snuffy

WAW!
Thanks a million for reading it, and for your kind comments!
I hope my next burst of emotions wont be so negative!  
Denise
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4 posted 04-02-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Snuffy! Your poem is very sad yet powerful in its emotions. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
snuffy
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5 posted 04-03-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for snuffy   Email snuffy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snuffy

Denise, THANKS!
Im glad I found this website.....not only is it fun, but also a soul "smooth operator", I can really express myself here, and not feel judged....
8-)
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powerful first post..and welcome to Passions...My prince charming is kept locked in the basement by Mr.Wrong lol..nice writing!

 
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Snuffy~
Welcome to the family of Passion's poets.
Great first entry.
Hope to see more from you.
~*Marge*~


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