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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


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Last Time

Once more
I allowed myself
too much.
Now a dissappointing figure
Guides me through
the tunnel.
I can never reach the light.
A walking shadow
Ipulsively stalks my presence
Disfiguring all that I have loved
up to this point.
One more time
I told myself with
such enthusiasm that I cannot deny
I have fallen.
And now my regrets are massive
This pattern is continuously repeating itself
And yet
I can't break away from the grasp
which he holds on me
Never again.
Never again.....


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Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
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Hi SorrowMystress,

It sounds like you will win this one, just because you have reconized it for what it is and that is half the battle.

Welcome to passions

Cerenity
Denise
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Sometimes we have to learn the same lessons over and over again until we finally get it. Great poem!

Denise
hsystems
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SorrowsMystress - Nice poem!  I especially like the imagery of the tunnel.  Sometimes it seems endless, but I have found that there's always a light at the end.  Keep up the good work, and welcome to Passions!


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serenity blaze
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4 posted 04-03-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sorrows--This is great.  And if it helps, I can relate.  Love to you, and thanks.
Billy Bolden
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Sorrows....
There is One who always understands our repeated lapses.  BB
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