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In You I See....

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 04-01-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

When I look at you
I see a man who is
Strong, caring, proud
Whose true beauty comes from within
To me you are handsome
In every way; inside and outside
The depth of your compassion
At times amazes me
For it is unusual to see
Such soft things in a man
They do not mean you are less
Masculine, protective, brave
Just that you are more in tune
With your emotions and feelings
Than most men are
This has made you a sensitive creature
Who should be shown love
Support, encouragement, and care
All those qualities that you possess
Are wonderful indeed
They are a part of why
I fell in love with you
So many years ago
You are a rare find
A treasure to behold
Very special to me
Now and always


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 04-01-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

ahh, what a touching and sweet poem written for the man that you love.  Have you shown this to him yet?  I am sure that he would melt.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 04-01-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Beautiful thoughts Lone wolf ... be sure to show it to him

Rex}>{{{{o>
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 04-01-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~
This is a strong affirmation of love.
Nice to see your thoughts.
I'm sure he knows how you feel.
I would think you show it first ...
and then write of it.

When the heart writes ... it's a good thing.
~*Marge*~




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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 04-02-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Melissa,
Yes, he has seen it and he did melt.  Thought it was very touching.  I do love him with all my heart and soul.  Thank you!!

Rex,
Thank you and he was the first to see before I posted it.

Marge,
Yes, he knows.  Try to show it every day of my life.  I feel very lucky to have found such a special man.  He is my love....old, new, happy, sad, through the good and the bad.  My heart writes a lot....not always happy, but it is always there.  Thank you!!


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Meadowmuse
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5 posted 04-02-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Such loving and sincere words, Lone Wolf. You are both blessed, it is clear. Beautiful thoughts here...thank you for sharing this.

~ Claire
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 04-02-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Claire,
Thank you and yes we are blessed.  It took us some time to realize that, but we are starting over with a fresh slate.  You are welcome on the sharing....my pleasure.

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
vandana
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7 posted 04-02-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem,I like it very much.!!!!!
Denise
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8 posted 04-02-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful!! Are we married to the same man?! LOL

Denise
Lone Wolf
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9 posted 04-02-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

vandana....thank you.  Happy you liked it.  

Denise....thank you, but to me he is the beautiful one.  The same man?  Is that where he's been??  LOL.  

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
CherylLynnMckee
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10 posted 04-02-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

lovely poem lonewolf...straight from the heart...the best kind.

 
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Lone Wolf** Beauty and style....well done!! Long ago I thought the "tougher..cockier" a man was the more of a man he was...I've grown up just a bit and have realized that a real man knows his heart and uses it   What a lucky man...to have you to tell him how wonderful he is!!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 04-02-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very touching, loving and sincere. The love pours out in your words, and I'm sure any man would melt at a verse such as this
Lovely
Liz
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