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Loneheart
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0 posted 2000-04-01 09:53 PM


Portrait of love

If mine heart was thy canvas my love
to paint upon as it pleaseth thee.
Would our love be a masterpiece
or should it be as the artists palette
upon which but one stroke of thy brush
would destroy all my longings for thee
as when an artist blends his colors?
Be ye kind with  thy brush fair maid
For only ye can add beauty unto this painting.
If thine hand be gentle with thy brush
Then it shall please thy eye as well as thy soul.
when created with love it shall fullfill
all thy longings for happiness.
When caressed  tenderly and with a sincere heart
it shall then and only then  become thy masterpiece.
With a soft sweet whisper it shall call unto thee saying  
I am thine alone for ye have completed my soul.
  






 Loneheart

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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2000-04-01 10:05 PM


Loneheart....lovely portrait you have painted here.  Thank you for sharing and good luck!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-04-01 10:13 PM


...such lovely thoughts your verse evokes.

~ Claire

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-04-02 12:35 PM


Lovely. An olde world charm to this one!  
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4 posted 2000-04-02 01:12 PM


LoneHeart~

~Feathered Touch~

A sabled brush of love's soft touch
Paint upon thine canvassed heart
Shading only the colors of love
To the gentleness on display
One feathered kiss of signature
Placed upon the soul of completion
Ah, the masterpiece is ready for view

~*Marge*~




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Parker
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5 posted 2000-04-02 02:16 PM


Yes I must say very lovely thoughts here.

Parker

Denise
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6 posted 2000-04-02 04:05 PM


What a beautiful portrait of love!!

Denise

Loneheart
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since 1999-09-13
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7 posted 2000-04-02 11:16 PM


Thank you all for such beautiful replies
your checks are in the mail lol just kidding you all are too kind just feeling good today and am happy for a change
and poet D I finally got your link on my site
you will find it on the
keeper of the rose with the rest of my wonderful friends links

 Loneheart

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-04-03 02:14 AM


A beautiful style Loneheart..I enjoyed this Portrait of love.   James
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