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Beyond Loves Reach

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Loneheart
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0 posted 04-01-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart


Beyond Loves Reach

Saddened in my silence am I  fair maid.
As I stand in the shadows of thy world
ye see me not, yet hear the cries of mine heart
surely ye must as they call unto thy soul.
Liken unto a nightingale's song
softly whispering I love thee.
How long my soul must I await the gentleness of thy touch?
Know ye not  my love.of the desires I hold within all are for thee
  The slightest glimpse of thy beauty
stirs longings within mine heart I have never known
alas my love thy absence I can no longer bare.
Enduring as I must the silence of love my heart weeps
although my heart beckons ye come unto me.
I cannot for a prisoner am I within the boundaries of mine own mind
for here is where I must stay, in the shadows of thy world.
Only to dream of thee in the loneliness of my mind
My desires, my hopes, my dreams of love and all its completeness shall
dwell only in the longings of my imagination.




 Loneheart


[This message has been edited by Loneheart (edited 04-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Loneheart - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 04-01-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very wistful, Loneheart.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 04-01-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneHeart~

Knave of ardor, thou hast spun
tale of love not yet begun.
Rapture sweetly set to song,
love of capture not yet done.

Sweetly though thou words may fall,
unlock thine heart to have it all.
I cannot come within the cell
of thy mind wherein thou dost dwell.

Of thine own making are shadows dark
Unleash thy mind with song of lark
Imagine now, thy dream come true,
possible by freeing the shadows of you.


Thank you for this very
unexpected inspiration.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Loneheart
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3 posted 04-01-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Thank you Elizabeth for the kind words
  


Marge your poem I will keep thank you
its beautiful
In thy poem thy words are true dear friend
many may knock at the door but if the key cannot be found then how shall they enter?  




 Loneheart
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4 posted 04-01-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Loneheart:  creative, imaginative and bittersweet.  Very well written! Applause!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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5 posted 04-01-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Loneheart, you speak for so many with this--
the yearning of your heart so apparent.
Just lovely.
Janet Marie
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6 posted 04-01-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

LH, this is exquisite...VERY lovely to read...it flows with grace and beauty...
you have a masterpiece in this one...
and look at the effect it had on margie girl...there is no better compliment than to inspire another poet with your words.
perfect poem marge!!
great job to you both...maybe you should write on together
take care, jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 04-02-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

very tender and beautiful
Could only have been written by a gentle heart
You should give this to her
Liz
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8 posted 04-02-2000 09:19 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A tender piece  
Loneheart
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9 posted 04-02-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Thank you Elizabeth for thy sweet words and thy advice
you are a very beautiful soul in whom great poetry
flows from so gracefully and very wise as well.
With thy wisdom hear my words my kind friend,
if ones cup should be filled til it runneth over
and there be no vessel to catch the precious
contents there of then it will be lost.
If thy arm reacheth forth into nothingness then
how shall thy gift be given?

 Loneheart
Loneheart
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10 posted 04-02-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Melissa,Janet,Serenity,and Hoot
Love that name
you are all so very kind thank you
Humbled am I.
Thy Servant Loneheart

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