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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-04-01 08:01 PM


Morning light

I'm always searching here and there
seeking love sweet love to share.
Tonight as I find myself in your arms this way
my question will be "will you stay or go away?"
My heart remains more than ready to receive at will
every pleasure your heart is willing and able to reveal.
My hope is when we share the morning light
trust and admiration will be in our sight
Only time and eagerly shared moments will tell
if love was found or has our search failed.

Jameslee@4.1.00


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-01 08:16 PM


James~
Oh .. I hope you've found each other.
You have such a loving heart.
Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
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2 posted 2000-04-01 09:29 PM


James this is really lovely.

Marina

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2000-04-01 10:08 PM


James....You write so sweet and from the heart.  This is beautiful.  I hope your love is found and returned.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Meadowmuse
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4 posted 2000-04-01 10:09 PM


Such a pretty verse, James. I'm hoping for you too.  

~ Claire

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-04-03 03:49 PM


Thank you Marge, Marina, Lone Wolf, and Claire for reading and for your nice comments.
I'm hoping for you also Claire.  You are lovely and romantic.        James

SorrowsMystress
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6 posted 2000-04-03 03:56 PM


Wonderful work....I particularly like "I'm always searching here and there
seeking love sweet love to share.

Love will always show it's face when you least expect it. I wish you well with the inspiration.....your work is greatly appreciated. A true poet. 2 thumbs up!

just_another_fe
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7 posted 2000-04-03 10:11 PM


oOoOo you go james lol i hope this works for ya hun.   good poem
Balladeer
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8 posted 2000-04-03 11:11 PM


Nice thoughts expressed here, James.
Isis
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9 posted 2000-04-04 12:27 PM


Nice hopes shared here James, ahhh but if it were that simple!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-04-04 02:36 AM


sweet poem of longing and hope "sbj"
full of your heart...you have so much to give
take care jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2000-04-04 08:14 AM


Thank you sorrow, angie, balladeer, isis, and janet for the nice comments.  James
hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 2000-04-04 10:17 AM


I will be so thrilled for you when it is Jim  
Denise
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13 posted 2000-04-04 12:24 PM


This is very pretty, James!

Denise

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2000-04-06 04:45 PM


Thank you Hoot Owl and that would make two of us.
Thank you Denise I appreciate it.   James

Parker
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15 posted 2000-04-06 08:15 PM


James, a very lovely poem. I do believe that the heart reveals what the mind is afraid to see.

Parker

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2000-04-07 03:23 PM


Thank you Parker...this is only my journey to find a relationship with mutual love and trust and admiration.   James
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