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thebeautybrat
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0 posted 04-01-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for thebeautybrat

All my friends are living here.

This is where i'm supposed to be.

This place where i grew up,

It means so much to me.

I don't want to leave.

Please don't make me go!

This is where I need to be,

This I'm sure i know.

I know you don't want to live here anymore,

But what about me?

I'm the one who has no choice here,

Why does this have to be?

I love this place,

It's absolutely great!

So are the people here,

Even the ones i've known to hate.

My friends will have to come with me,

If we can't stay here.

I'm moving in a few months.

It's coming very near.

All my friends will come to visit,

But when they leave,

I'm going to miss it.

All the things i'm so used to,

Will always be in my memory.

Of this little old town,

We call Granite City.

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 04-01-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Nice work here--I have lived in 4 different houses, except they're all in the same general area for the most part...but moving is STILL a pain! Hope everything works out for you.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 04-01-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

I moved alot when I was young and it sux...but you'll make new friends to go along with the old...the best of luck to you.I know its hard..hang in there.

 
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 04-01-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Brat~
Welcome to Passion's.
This is one home you can take with
you anywhere you go.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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thebeautybrat
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4 posted 04-01-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

hey thanks all of you and i will love all my friends even though i'm a couple states away!! thanks for takin time to read my poem and i love everyone!!
Denise
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5 posted 04-01-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions! No matter where you go the ones you love will always be with you in your heart!

Denise
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 04-01-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

It's so difficult to be uprooted from friends, and you have expressed that so well. Keep writing from your heart, your enotions are showing and are being felt. That's what poetry is all about. Keep up the good work
Liz
thebeautybrat
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7 posted 04-01-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

Hey!!! thanks every1 4 telling me your thoughts about my poem. They mean very much to me!! I love evry1 who reads my poems so I love you all!!! :^) ***LOVE***
Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 04-01-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry



This is VERY good, I have never moved out of the town I grew up in but through your poetry I feel how painful it is and offer you **Angel wing Hugs**  

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

thebeautybrat
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Florida


9 posted 04-01-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

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Lone Wolf
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10 posted 04-01-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Beautybrat,
Hang in there!!  I know moving is tough, but remember "home is where the heart is" and there could be lots of new friends waiting to meet you out there.  The old ones will understand and visit if they are really and truly your friends.  Good luck!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
thebeautybrat
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11 posted 04-01-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

Hey!!! I love my home!! I love every1 here 2!!! bye!!! ***LOVE***
thebeautybrat
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12 posted 04-02-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

***LOVE*** KISS KISS ~~***~~MUAH!!!~~***~~
JamesMichael
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13 posted 04-02-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

beauty this is a lovely poem...sorry you have to move soon.  My dad was in the Air Force while I was growning up so we moved about every three years..it was kind of stressful cause every time you got settled in it was time to move again.  You learn to make the best of the situation.  In some ways it was interesting..I got to live in Kentucky, florida, georgia, montana ,japan, and california.   Keep writing...you're doing good.  Loved the artword "Love is for Ever".  Is your name Eve?  James

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 04-02-2000).]
EagleOne
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14 posted 04-02-2000 10:39 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Moving can be a real painful experience. Hard to leave your friends behind, but you will always have the memories.
thebeautybrat
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15 posted 04-02-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

Thanks for your replies!!!
***~~~~~MUAH~~~~~***
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16 posted 04-02-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-beauty

this is a great piece you have here. moving is really hard to do sometimes. both of my best friends have moved away. i live in north carolina...and my one best friend moved to boston, and the other one lives outside of chicago. hang in there, and im sure if you're friends are who you think they are...you all will be good friends still for many years to come. take care

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
hsystems
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17 posted 04-02-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Hey, there, BeautyBrat - great poem!  It really expresses the emotions involved with moving to a new home.  I have moved several times in my life, but always within the same state.  But, some of my best friends have moved out of state, so I have felt the separation from the "other side."  Keep writing!

Troy


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thebeautybrat
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18 posted 04-02-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

Hi!!
Thanks
for
you
comments!!
I
am
sad
about
moving
:^(
thebeautybrat
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19 posted 04-03-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

i love granite
 
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