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Rejection from a woman

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Slashed soul
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0 posted 04-01-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul


Are you cut up?
why don't you talk.
something I said, what did I do..
stick the knife in you?

How do you feel, walls gone up,
hurt me bad, make me sad,
feelings in a blender,
heart in a grinder.

I'm coming to get you back,
save this ship of love from the rocks,
too late! I hear the sirens scream,
shattered nerves, broken dreams.

I wont listen to reason,
I wont listen to friends,
turn back the time,
let me start again.

-Rich-

(I just find this a good subject!-xxx)


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1 posted 04-01-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It is a good subject! You have written quite a poweful poem here.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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***Relating much to acutely***
This is very well written....you bring the nerves right to the surface with this one.  Well done with so much style.
**Angel Wing Hugs**....Because they never ask for anything in return.
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