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Jim Raynor
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0 posted 2000-04-01 03:27 PM



Life, thats the thing we fear most, the ideal threat that keeps us on our toes, it brings you love, happiness, truth, lies, death, sadness, and all the above,

it acts like your best friend for a minute than back stabs you once again
it is something that you can not trust

something that brings you luck something that gives you hope,courage, and strength, but at the same time brings you hatred and pain

so I ask my self once again what is the meaning of this soul called life?

 Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-04-01 04:10 PM


I am wondering myself...and I did like that second verse.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 2000-04-01 05:21 PM


we win some we lose some...you accuratley pened it..Very nice writing!

 

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