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Rod17NYS
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0 posted 04-01-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for Rod17NYS   Email Rod17NYS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rod17NYS

Love?
Whatís Love?
There are poems and lyrics
trying to explain the real meaning of a simple word,
But none of them will ever come close,
because you could spend hours describing the texture,
but You'll never understand it, if You donít get to smell the rose.

For many years I wondered,
what it would be like to completely lose myself for someone,
to feel my breath being taken away, and feel my soul having no one to blame.
For many years I wondered,
What it would be like to fall in love so badly, that everything I said, and every moment spent would feel so right,
to wake up every morning proud of having You in my life,
to have someone to hold tight when everything starts to fall apart.

But Today I no longer wonder,
I've finally found the real meaning of love,
the very person I was meant for,
everything I wanted and I could never ask for more,
And if I could tell the world just one thing,
it would be to always believe in things unseen, because nothing is more powerful than the message of a dream.

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CherylLynnMckee
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Beautiful poem..lovely message..sounds like you have found true love..congrats!

 
JamesMichael
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I think we all hope and dream for this thing called Love.    James
Janet Marie
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For many years I wondered,
what it would be like to completely lose myself for someone,
to feel my breath being taken away, and feel my soul having no one to blame.
For many years I wondered,
What it would be like to fall in love so badly, that everything I said, and every moment spent would feel so right,
to wake up every morning proud of having You in my life,
to have someone to hold tight when everything starts to fall apart.

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Rod, this is excellent!!!
powerful of your emotions and very well written out thoughts.
very good work!!
"aint love grand"  
take care, jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
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4 posted 04-03-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***rod,
this is a fantastic poem.
you are so lucky to have captured love, now just you hold on to it...k?    
well done and welcome to Passions.

 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


just_another_fe
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This is a great poem and im glad you have found true love. luv that last line  
serenity blaze
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6 posted 04-04-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

oh.  oh.  oh...  I found this profoundly beautiful...applause and rose petals strewn...
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