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Until there was you...

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Rod17NYS
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Until there was You..

I thought I knew myself,
I thought I knew where I was,
But the only thing I really knew,
is where I've been,
And that I wish I could hide...
cuz it's a place with no hope, no peace,
where no sun would ever shine...
Until there was You..You..
You changed my life, You made me want to smile
You set me free by making me lose myself in your arms...but there're still times, where Iím dragged into that same dark past, if You knew the pain, maybe You'd understand...it's cold in here..I strive to reach your hand...
But after the storm is over, Iím only left with the pieces of a confused future, and as I put them together, I see what I still got...that's the story of my life..just hope I never lose the pieces of your heart...

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CherylLynnMckee
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1 posted 04-01-2000 05:35 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

I really liked the ending...lovely sentiment!

 
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Rod, I hope this person knows just how special they are to you.....I enjoyed this poem - thanks for sharing it.   Roniece  
Rod17NYS
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Thanx and don't worry, i strong believe that person knows how feel...cause he feels the same way too...=o)

Rod
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