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lucky
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0 posted 2000-04-01 11:50 AM


Spring News
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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-04-01 11:59 AM


What a beautiful picture this paints. Spring is here!

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 2000-04-01 12:12 PM


I love poems about nature..you have painted such a picture...great poem!

 

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-04-01 12:17 PM


Wonderful imagery  
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-04-01 12:33 PM


A
new
look at Spring
through your eyes
offers up visions of great
surprise never - ending joy of
spring - oh, this is a wondrous thing
'Lucky' that you stopped by on your way
offering up your fresh view of Spring today
Caught up in the reverie delightfully cast
before my eyes in visions that will last
evermore the sweetest surprise
Spring as seen through
your knowing eyes
Spring springs
forth
~

Martie
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5 posted 2000-04-01 01:00 PM


Lucky this girl who reads the word crossed page that tells of things she never saw or could through sunny eyes of south but would now know how vision seeks the truth from other places and sings as sweet and true as you with your brush that touches me.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho
6 posted 2000-04-01 01:29 PM


I love your imagery too, my sweetheart.  And I love it when you write these gentle beauties.  When you do, I am there.  I see it, I hear it, I feel it.  Thank you for the journey.


lucky
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7 posted 2000-04-01 05:12 PM


I hate it when so many things lull and go
leaving me behind security’s latched door I only
came back later to think I really should’ve written more
yet precautiously (oops) I turned to secure the stair door just
in thyme to remember that I needed to water my window growy’s
and returning I found you all... I love you, your all so surprizing, my
best to you [Elizabeth][Cheryl] my teacher [Ruth] and these other
two fellow colleges of mine [Marge and Martie] although we
will all be graduating this cuarter (oops) fortunately for
us, as Ruth will have to stay behind (you know
something like the captain
of the ship, thing)
however we might break down
in the sultry simmer (not because we think
the ship is sinking) and really surprize (oops) her
with a Vacasion (oops) and don’t any of ya

tell er I said a word... ya hear..!

RJG your as tinder as ever.


 

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