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Marge Tindal
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Teardrop
~*Marge Tindal*~

You
are a
tear I've
not yet cried
not yet shed you
from weeping eye
tear of regret
tear of gone
~ tear ~



© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Very nice Marge.......Tears are the release of feelings from the heart.


 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


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Hello, David~
Yes, you are right.
It is so good to see you.
Hope you're doing well, my friend.
Love and hugs ..
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dear Marge*
This is breathtaking...in presentation and in words.  You've done it again my friend!!
*AW hugs*
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Ah, Marge...you are a sculpture as well as a poet.  Well done.

INclan
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ButterfliesDC~

A
tear
remembers
my Mother on
this her birthday
memories flooded
to the eyes of
remembering
~ tear ~

INclan~

A
tear
of joy gone
pain comes with
remembering just
what I have lost
who I have left
who I have yet
to share in
~ tears ~

*Thank you both for your replies.
~*Marge*~




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Tears need not always be sad my friend  
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teardrops ... like raindrops are more apt to fall on a cloudy day ... but i like sun showers best
nicely done Marge

Rex}>{{{{o>
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Hoot~

A
tear
that falls
on this day
is full of joy
that went
away


Rex~

A
rain
brings the
cleansing that
makes rainbows
in the sunshine
of my day
~smiles~

*My heart-felt thanks to you both.



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~marge

wow! this was excellent, both in form and in expression. i really like what you have done with this! tears are a wonderful way to express so many emotions we are feeling. and sometimes its good just to release them and to let them fall. take care.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Brief..lovely..and full of meaning!

 
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Amy~

A
tear
in falling
silently says
what my heart
is feeling inside
I celebrate
~ tears ~


CherylLynn~

A
tear
so brief
fell to the
ground making
not one single
sound silent
~ tears ~

*Thank you both for your thoughtfulness.
~*Marge*


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Those wet pieces of feeling
full and fragile glistening
streak my cheek for one going
and for those gone squeezing
pieces of feeling into liquid
      expression

What a wonderful poem, dear Marge, that touched me this day.
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Martie~

A
tear
spilled out
joined others
on it's way to
traveling through
sorrows felt within
today's memories
far too many
~ tears ~


*I know, my friend, I know.
Hugs to you.
~*Marge*~




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A nice refreshing read.Thanx.

Take Care,

Travis Kennedy.
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TravisK~

A
tear
from our
heart refreshes
our soul as it ends
its journey from our
eyes to a puddle of
memories left in
its wake


*Welcome to Passion's Travis.
Thank you for your reply.
You're gonna like it here !
~*Marge*~


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Tears hold so many memories. Both sad and Happy. The cleansing of the soul.
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I sympathize with you Marge. This is a beautiful poem and beautifully presented.

Denise
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KitKat~


A
tear
of sweet
memory falls
weeping from
the heart
~tear~


Denise~

One
more
tear then
no more will
fall I feel that
I have cried them all
feeling that in just one
day all the teardrops are
fallen away until the next
one comes to say, remember
me, I am the tear that you
cried in your darkest hour
tears for loved ones
~ gone ~


*Thank you, KitKat.
*I felt a hug, Denise.
~*Marge*~


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*sniff* A beautiful poem, Marge...

Hugs, Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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Elizabeth~

~
No
more
tears
do I cry
oh sure that'll
be the day when
I die and then
again maybe
not

*Thanks for your reply.
I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~

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Marge - I'm sending you a case of tissues....
This is great, of course..
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I know the tears you've cried today~
I, too, have cried those tears~
But with a different memory I hold so dear~

I've learned to let go, to accept what is~
But not a day goes by that I wonder what could have been~

I felt your poem Marge~
So beautiful were your tears~
Marie~  


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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How sad ?But I like this poem.
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I think that when you cry your tears cleanse your soul of the sorrow that is making your heart ache so much at that moment. Tears of joy happen because you are so happy that your body just can't contain it. Either way, tears are good things....let em flow!! Beautiful poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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