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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Teardrop ~*Marge Tindal*~ You are a tear I've not yet cried not yet shed you from weeping eye tear of regret tear of gone ~ tear ~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Very nice Marge.......Tears are the release of feelings from the heart. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello, David~ Yes, you are right. It is so good to see you. Hope you're doing well, my friend. Love and hugs .. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Dear Marge* This is breathtaking...in presentation and in words. You've done it again my friend!! *AW hugs* |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, Marge...you are a sculpture as well as a poet. Well done. INclan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ A tear remembers my Mother on this her birthday memories flooded to the eyes of remembering ~ tear ~ INclan~ A tear of joy gone pain comes with remembering just what I have lost who I have left who I have yet to share in ~ tears ~ *Thank you both for your replies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tears need not always be sad my friend  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
teardrops ... like raindrops are more apt to fall on a cloudy day ... but i like sun showers best nicely done Marge Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ A tear that falls on this day is full of joy that went away Rex~ A rain brings the cleansing that makes rainbows in the sunshine of my day ~smiles~ *My heart-felt thanks to you both. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~marge wow! this was excellent, both in form and in expression. i really like what you have done with this! tears are a wonderful way to express so many emotions we are feeling. and sometimes its good just to release them and to let them fall. take care. Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Brief..lovely..and full of meaning! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ A tear in falling silently says what my heart is feeling inside I celebrate ~ tears ~ CherylLynn~ A tear so brief fell to the ground making not one single sound silent ~ tears ~ *Thank you both for your thoughtfulness. ~*Marge* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Those wet pieces of feeling full and fragile glistening streak my cheek for one going and for those gone squeezing pieces of feeling into liquid expression What a wonderful poem, dear Marge, that touched me this day. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ A tear spilled out joined others on it's way to traveling through sorrows felt within today's memories far too many ~ tears ~ *I know, my friend, I know. Hugs to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TravisK New Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 8England |
A nice refreshing read.Thanx. Take Care, Travis Kennedy. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TravisK~ A tear from our heart refreshes our soul as it ends its journey from our eyes to a puddle of memories left in its wake *Welcome to Passion's Travis. Thank you for your reply. You're gonna like it here ! ~*Marge*~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Tears hold so many memories. Both sad and Happy. The cleansing of the soul. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I sympathize with you Marge. This is a beautiful poem and beautifully presented. Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ A tear of sweet memory falls weeping from the heart ~tear~ Denise~ One more tear then no more will fall I feel that I have cried them all feeling that in just one day all the teardrops are fallen away until the next one comes to say, remember me, I am the tear that you cried in your darkest hour tears for loved ones ~ gone ~ *Thank you, KitKat. *I felt a hug, Denise. ~*Marge*~ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*sniff* A beautiful poem, Marge... Hugs, Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ ~ No more tears do I cry oh sure that'll be the day when I die and then again maybe not *Thanks for your reply. I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marge - I'm sending you a case of tissues....  This is great, of course.. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I know the tears you've cried today~ I, too, have cried those tears~ But with a different memory I hold so dear~ I've learned to let go, to accept what is~ But not a day goes by that I wonder what could have been~ I felt your poem Marge~ So beautiful were your tears~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
How sad ?But I like this poem. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I think that when you cry your tears cleanse your soul of the sorrow that is making your heart ache so much at that moment. Tears of joy happen because you are so happy that your body just can't contain it. Either way, tears are good things....let em flow!! Beautiful poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ A box of tissues is the thing I needed to dry these tears thanks Mariee~ A tear is shared with those who also cry sorrows tear ~smile~ VanDana~ A tear of glad glistens ~ again ~ ESP~ A tear of joy now flows happy tears shared with friends *I thank you all for your replies. The sunshine of today's memories has brought a smile of renewal. ~*Marge*~ |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
~Marge~ You brought another tear of joy to my eyes as you have done with so many of your poems. I love to read your work. And I have loved everything I have found in the archives!!!!!! You are wonderful  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Thank you so very much for your kind words. People like you make it a pure pleasure to write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
marge, i am now wondering why i didnt spend more time at Open when i was a new member..so many wonderful writings from you that i have missed!!! so glad i stumbled into the archives tonight  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Kaile I am just so gladdened that you found your way here. I smile with great joy at you. ~*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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