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Michael
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0 posted 04-01-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

SATIATED


I have a dream, it calls to me,
Lures me through the night.
A star in gleam, it falls to me,
This moment, all is right.

I float, I fly, in dream in dance
Knowing her heart is mine.
If by an eye naked to chance
Though taken by its shine.

Drifting away by solemn stare
Through pools of green and gray.
Emotions sway by the affair
To her teasing bouquet.

A touch, a kiss, a feeling shared,
Tingled with butterflies.
By sweet remiss, by passion dared,
Mingled to love's surprise.

As hand to hand, we twirl, we spin,
We bleed the lover's touch.
To understand this whirl within
A need needed so much.

Never a word touching the lips
Thereby obscured through lust.
By song unheard the passion drips,
Whereby is cured all trust.

In gentle arms, now lay asleep,
Enfolded evermore.
By softest charms, all while I weep
To hold what I adore.

Hope that ne'er flies by come of dawn
Or morning's dewy mist.
But shines glints of forever drawn
To eyes I can't resist.


Michael Anderson





[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-01-2000).]
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devina
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1 posted 04-01-2000 03:18 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

*I will hold your words in dream...till tomorrow comes...*

You've touched my heart deeply with this Michael...I couldn't ask for anything more, than what I've found in you...

Love ~D


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 04-01-2000 03:53 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Michael~
This is indeed a lovely render from
a heart that is full of anticipation.

'Hope that ne'er flies by come of dawn
Or morning's dewy mist.
But shines glints of forever drawn
To eyes I can't resist.'

Have a wonderful weekend ...
there is a KARMA in the air.  
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 04-01-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is beautiful like all of your other poetry. What a takent you possess. All of the poems of yous that I have read have made me feel all tingly!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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Magnificent!!!  You write with such style and grace as always I'm moved by your words...thank you.
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful words my friend
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6 posted 04-01-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah! We are never sated by your words, we can't get enough! I look forward to seeing your name here because I know therein lies truth, beauty and wisdom.  
Nicole
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7 posted 04-01-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Wow, Michael...this is extraordinarily beautiful, I am quite taken by it!  

A stanza in particular that caught my eye, and wouldn't let go:

In gentle arms, now lay asleep,
Enfolded evermore.
By softest charms, all while I weep
To hold what I adore.

What lovely musings you have floating around in that mind!    Well done as always, my friend.

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8 posted 04-01-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Breathtakingly beautiful...inspired..dripping with love...divine!!!!

 
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This is pure contentment!  lovely, lovely, love once again...And an incredibly pretty portrait of you two...  More admiration from serenity...Hugs.
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10 posted 04-01-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Sir Michael
this touches ones soul
thank you for shareing

 Loneheart
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11 posted 04-01-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

An exquisite work, Michael!

Elizabeth


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Yes, this is indeed a beautiful poem, Michael. Such tenderness and appreciation for love...wonderful.

~ Claire
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Soft, gentle, and exquisite Michael.  This flows wonderfully and has a great romantic feel. Exellent work, my friend.  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
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I'm smiling....
Pepper
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Yes, very beautiful Michael ....
So soft ... so sweet .... and so very romantic ......
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Beautiful, tender and romantic!!

Denise
Michael
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17 posted 04-03-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

devina, all I can say is ditto that, my dear.  You have touched me like no other.

Marge, Karma is wonderful, is it not?  You have a smiley poem waiting for me?  I think I'm ready for it...

PdV, we know you can't get enough - that's why we let you moderate Adult..LOL  Serious, thank you, I honestly think you are my biggest fan.  You alone are one of my biggest inspirations...

Satiate, indeed there are lovely musings floating around in here.  I'm glad you found this piece special.

Thank you each and all for such kind replies.


Michael

  
 
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