And I couldn't tell her a thing
not what she wanted to hear
she believed what she felt
that I should have felt the same
hating me for just one fault
I did not love her
jb, this is a awesome as the last one...
(which I just read again and printed out)
your poems have this unique, quiet, quality about them, like the calm before the storm...you write very effectively of emotion and you do it in a few powerful lines.its quite a gift.
take care, jm
she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.