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Me & You

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Aimster
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0 posted 03-31-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

You & Me
By: Amy M. Kennedy

I see you from across the room, you are staring right at me...
There are tons of people all around us, but you are all I see...
I start to walk over to where you are, still holding your gaze...
Somehow I manage to make it to you, still suspended in a daze...
Gently you take me into your arms, as we begin to sway
Moving to the beat of the music, you take my breath away
You hold me even closer, as my heart begins to melt
My head is far into the clouds, my heart feeling something its never felt
Losing myself in this moment, our lips softly touch
It's hard to breathe, I want to say " I love you so much"
I open my eyes, and you're looking at me, with such sweet passion on your face
And I know forever and always I will remember you, this moment, this place
For this is when I fell in love with you, and I think you love me too
Oh how I wait for the words from your lips to my ears, "I love you"
    




 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 03-31-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Oh I love this one Amy!     
Your words flow easily and I wish you well - he would be a fool not to tell you so! good luck my friend    Roniece  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-31-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

OH MAN  BIG OLD FRIGGEN *SIGH*
AMY-GIRL..you got bit by the bug too...spring fever is still burning up the forums...WOW this poem flows like butter baby...who ever he is he inpsires great things in you...
im so happy for you.
love ya, jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
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3 posted 04-01-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Gosh Amy, I hope you always feel this way.  Love is great, isn't it?  Great poem.
Michael
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4 posted 04-01-2000 03:00 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautifully romantic, Amy.  Talk about aking your breath away.  Yep - spring is in the air, alright!... btw, did  you have a birthday - happy b-day...

Michael
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Floating gently on a cloud....


5 posted 04-01-2000 03:32 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is sooooooo romantic!!! *sigh* What a wonderful piece of poetry. The one you love would be crazy not to love you back!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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6 posted 04-01-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amy~
You have some lovely thoughts here.
Enjoyed peeking into your heart.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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