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Ambushed By Your Love

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Marge Tindal
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Ambushed By Your Love
~*Marge Tindal*~

Wanton wagons circling,
painted ponies running wild and free,
I feel the ambush of your love
coming to capture the stampede in me.

Lighting the night with passion,
arrows flaming with the fire,
sent to meet their mark
burned with scorching desire.

From the throat of the Warrior,
war whoops of delight
Taking now his Maiden fair
waiting for this night

Surrounded with the majesty
of eagles flying overhead,
it is not the ambush that I fear
but not being claimed
I would dread.

I've surely been ambushed,
taken with relished delight.
Ambushed by your love
once more on this night.





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 03-31-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm too bushed to ambush you,
Dear Margie, for your love
Perhaps a push would "spur" me on..
Or else a little shove.

The cattle were a pain today,
Three wagons lost a wheel
And strong desire to light your fire's
The LAST thing that I feel!

The cook rode off 'cause he got tired
Of cooking pots of beans
And where I sit, I've got a split
In every pair of jeans.

There's Injuns up there in the hills
Deep snow along the pass
My burro died along the way
I'm dragging my poor ass.

And now you want an ambush, gal?
You're feeling kind of saucy?
Last time you wore out Paladin
And half his gol'darned posse!

I'm gonna join that Injun tribe.
That's what I'm gonna do
And if you try to ambush me
I swear to gawd I'll Sioux!!!!





[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 03-31-2000).]
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2 posted 03-31-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Now, here's a nice thought!

Elizabeth


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Marge**
You are the master...I am in awe of your talent and the stories that you tell with your words....I long to fly like you   but I'm content to merely watch you soar.
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Marge...you never dissapoint me  
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5 posted 03-31-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Excellent as always, a very enjoyable read.
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Marge
what a way to be ambushed, I especially liked the 4th stanza
LoL
tracie


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7 posted 03-31-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Marge!! But of course!!  

Hillarious reply Balladeer!!  

Denise
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8 posted 03-31-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

margie girl this is so great...I wanna play cowboys and indians too..and the visuals this brought to mind...
well,nevermind...   
BUT do you see what you inspired in sweet balladeer...Im still laughing so hard I cant type...man I love this place...LOL
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9 posted 03-31-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Totally awesome, Marge!  Yee haw!

Corinne
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10 posted 04-01-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Balladeer~
You are surely the King Of Quip.
I'm laughing at the mere thought of
your 'Sioux'-ing.  
Such a renegade you are.
Very, very funny, my friend.

Elizabeth~
Thank you, gal.

ButterfliesDC~
What a nice reply.  I thank you.
This was inspired by my soul-mate and
friend from Canada. So glad you enjoyed it.

Hoot~
Thank you, my friend.

Mike~
I am always pleased at your read.

Tracie~
You are so easily pleased, my friend.
Yeah, I like that stanza too.

Devina~
Knew you'd enjoy it.
Yes, isn't that Balladeer something?
Keeps me laughing for sure.

Denise~
Thanks, babe.

Janet Marie~
So pleased you like.
Yes, that Balladeer can get a giggle
out of all of us, can't he?

Corinne~
LOL at your 'yee-haw'



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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So tell us ... who won ...the maiden or the warrior

Rex}>{{{{o>
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Rex~
From the smile on my face ...
I'd say the ~Maiden~ won !
From the smile on his ...
the ~Warrior~ is sure he won !
<~~~~~~~~~~Both~~~~~~~~~~>
Thanks for the read.
~*Marge*~



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WOW!!!!!!!!!! This is a lovely poem. You have such a way with words. Your talent totally awes me!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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I do believe I've been ambushed myself Marge!!!! ...Have I told you lately how much I love you and that karma of yours???

Have a great weekend honey, I know I will!!!

Love you,
~D


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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ESP~
Lizzie, thank you for those words of encouragement.  I sure do enjoy writing
and sharing it with others.

Devina~
GIRLFRIEND .. you have a WONDERFUL
weekend.  KARMA is for the taking.
I love you too, little one.
Be you ... and that will be enough !
~*Marge*~




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HI Marge,

ooOOOP's I lost my pony, were is he, (SMILE)
can't ride in to battle without a pony, oh well I guess i'll have to walk.
You make me SMILE SO MUCH thank you girl friend.

Cerenity
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WOW...your a great talent...I like the part about not being claimed..the old saying holds true...better to be looked over than overlooked..wonderful poem!

 
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Cerenity~

To heck with riding in .. FLY !  


CherylLynn~
Thank you so much.
I'll take 'looked-over' anyday !
How about 'worked-over' ?
Did I say that ?  
LOL !
~*Marge*~


  



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Marge, deaar
Very impressed with your graphics
More impressed with your poetry
You are the queen of clever
Love ya
Liz
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The Maiden smiles and winks an eye*****
I knew he'd get me by and by....
This warrior dreams on.......
Lovya marge.........pleasant thoughts...

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Lizzie, my friend~
Glad you enjoyed.
My 'cleverness' is inspired by
the sweetest man I've ever known ...

~Warrior, My Warrior~

You have been my inspiration,
my soul-mate, my friend ...
the 'visions' in this piece are yours,
brought to life by the tempting ideas
you place in my field of view.

A little touch of your love is all
it takes to inspire this ~Maiden~
to ride the painted pony to the page
and beyond.
We meet in the glen of musing.
I am more because you care.  

Always my greatest encourager from
day one of our 'being', I love you.
~*Your Maiden*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-01-2000).]
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Filled with envy over here!  And I must atone for the being naughty--I completely forgot to tell you how beautifully you captured the spirit of Spirt...And now this...Marge, you are simply amazing!  Love.
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Marge, you are simply amazing!  
was the words I read on the last reply
above this one
and I agree with all my friends
you are wonderful as always

 Loneheart
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Marge,
You never cease to amaze me with your words.  This is wonderful!!!  Thank you very much for the kind words to mine.  It is nice to know I am appreciated.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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