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0 posted 2000-03-31 07:59 PM


Smudges of dirt on that little face,
Those ringlets now full of sand,
Grass stained knees on the overalls,
A huge worm in the delicate hand.

Big eyes as clear as crystal pools,
While describing the trap she'd set,
Pausing to catch another breath,
Before she gave a name to this pet!

Now she's off to the swing set,
Spinning clumsily around on the bar,
Her pudgy legs flailing away,
This tiny gymnastics star.

Oh to keep the clock from ticking on,
To stop the hands from going round,
To keep this child as she is right now,
Her laughter a most precious sound.

But time, it will go marching on,
And as she should, this child will grow,
It's the memories of these moments,
That will help when it's time to let go.



© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-03-31 08:30 PM


How very sweet and touching! A beautiful picture you painted here--is this about your daughter?

Elizabeth


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-The Crucible


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2 posted 2000-03-31 08:34 PM


This was so touching and beautiful! A true piece of artwork you have here!

Take care,

AMY  

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3 posted 2000-03-31 10:17 PM


This is precious, Bonnie! Very beautiful!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-03-31 11:05 PM


Elizabeth, Amy & Denise - Thanks so much for reading this, your replies are much appreciated...Elizabeth, no I have 2 sons, this was for a friend.
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