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Collins
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0 posted 2000-03-31 06:12 PM



I hate the way she rolls her eyes!!!!
I hate the way she ignores my telephone calls!!!!!
I hate it when she stands me up!!
I hate it when she leaves me alone!!!
I hate not knowing where she is!!!!
I hate not being there for her!!!!
I hate the way she doesn't show she cares!!!!
but ohhh............when she smiles at me!!




[This message has been edited by Collins (edited 04-01-2000).]

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Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 2000-03-31 06:39 PM


That was a very interesting piece.  Love to see more work from you.



 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
*Cassie Roseen*



Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-31 09:46 PM


Love can be that way, can't it? For a title how about 'When She Smiles'?

Denise

CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 2000-04-01 02:25 PM


Its amazing what we let people get away with when we love them..nice piece collin.

 

TravisK
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4 posted 2000-04-01 02:28 PM


Ah the joys of romance !Nice,thanx

Take care ,
Travis Kennedy

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5 posted 2000-04-01 05:36 PM



Collins....so easy to have conviction until they are looking you in the eye......"I don't care if he ever calls again....GOTTA RUN.....The phone is ringing"....Well done  

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6 posted 2000-04-01 06:46 PM


Collins~
Ahhhh ... the enigmatic smile.
Gets 'em everytime !
~*Marge*~


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Collins
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7 posted 2000-04-02 08:30 PM


thanks for you kind replies.
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