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Collins
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0 posted 03-31-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for Collins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Collins


I hate the way she rolls her eyes!!!!
I hate the way she ignores my telephone calls!!!!!
I hate it when she stands me up!!
I hate it when she leaves me alone!!!
I hate not knowing where she is!!!!
I hate not being there for her!!!!
I hate the way she doesn't show she cares!!!!
but ohhh............when she smiles at me!!




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1 posted 03-31-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a very interesting piece.  Love to see more work from you.



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Love can be that way, can't it? For a title how about 'When She Smiles'?

Denise
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Its amazing what we let people get away with when we love them..nice piece collin.

 
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Ah the joys of romance !Nice,thanx

Take care ,
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Collins....so easy to have conviction until they are looking you in the eye......"I don't care if he ever calls again....GOTTA RUN.....The phone is ringing"....Well done  
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Collins~
Ahhhh ... the enigmatic smile.
Gets 'em everytime !
~*Marge*~


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thanks for you kind replies.
 
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