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My Sin

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Meadowmuse
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0 posted 03-31-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse


My Sin



This longing, I need now impart
as words of love leap to my heart.
In cadence with yours, sweet, my love
they fall from heavens high above.
Is it sin, this ache, this bliss?
If sin it is, then I have kissed
with sinful lips and loved, unwise,  
with sinning heart and sinful eyes.
I cannot keep from touching you
whether love or lust or sin is true.
I feel the passion's pearling rise
and see it mirrored, love, within your eyes.


Dear LadyClaire


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INclan
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1 posted 03-31-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Oh, Claire,

I really like this...you have out done yourself. Very well written.

HUGS,

INclan
Martie
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2 posted 03-31-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You write of love with such sweet passion...so very lovely!
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 03-31-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Any expression of Love that beautiful is not sinful!
About the time i think i am a poet, i read something this beautiful and realize i have a LONG way to go.
So well written and so thoroughly enjoyed.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
ESP
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4 posted 03-31-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lovely poem!! Such intense passion! This is just great! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Local Rebel
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5 posted 03-31-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

truly, truly sensual... very nice MM...
Poet deVine
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6 posted 03-31-2000 05:04 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful!  
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 03-31-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Your best poem i have read! Then again, i like sensuality. This one is so sexy. And so beautiful! You are too much. *S*
Janet Marie
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8 posted 03-31-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

C, this is exceptional, and I swear you wrote it from my hearts view...I relate to this so much these days...
amazing as always....
jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
Meadowmuse
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9 posted 03-31-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I am immeasurably grateful to you all ~ your words are so very touching to me. I must admit, I had a special kind of inspiration with this little poem. Thank you, in earnest, for reading.

~ Claire
Denise
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10 posted 03-31-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, Claire. Very well expressed!

Denise
Meadowmuse
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11 posted 03-31-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Denise, thank you. You always take time to read the work I post here, and I so appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.  

~ Claire
Mike
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12 posted 03-31-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed would be a wee bit of an understatement.  Your ability to infuse such passion into the beauty of your words
cannot be a learned trait, it has to be gift. Beautifully expressed
pen of passion
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Well, I've been there, so I can relate.  I thoroughly regreted that, but enjoyed this.
doreen peri
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Lovely... articulate... well crafted! Wonderful!
Meadowmuse
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Mike...thank you. The gift, in my view, is to be able to share some of my work from time to time with the likes of true artists such as yourself. You know how I love your work. Thank you for reading this one.

pen of passion...thank you for reading and letting me know what you think. Glad you enjoyed this.

Doreen...thank you for such an encouraging response.  

~ Claire




Rex Allen McCoy
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Another beautiful poem Claire

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EagleOne
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17 posted 04-01-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

I see much passion here, but very little sin.
Suzanne
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18 posted 04-01-2000 02:19 AM       View Profile for Suzanne   Email Suzanne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suzanne

WOW, ok im new here but i have to say that is one of the best poems i have ever read! it was great! i really really look forward to more from you  
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19 posted 04-01-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Claire~
If this be sin ... let me in !  
Your inspiration had to be special
to illicit these beautiful thoughts.
Lovely, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 04-01-2000 05:09 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Sweet, evocative, gentle -- yet yearning. Wonderful.

Mike
Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 04-01-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Oh, how I admire your poetry, Claire
This is so exquisite in it's sound and it's sentiment. This is both passionate and beautiful.
Your talent overwhelms me
Liz
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Lovely  
 
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