I think you have made a good effort with a theme that most teens struggle with while trying to find themselves in this world.
A comment or two if you don't mind. The expression could have been better except for some spelling errors and omitted words.
May i suggest you try the review screen before submitting to correct some of these areas in the future.
I think you have a writers imagination and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Welcome to Passions. You'll find a lot of nice people here.
[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-31-2000).]