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Heaven's Fall

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 03-31-2000 04:02 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-31-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a lovely piece of poetry. I too believe that heaven is to come. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-31-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea
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For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

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this is beautiful and so tender...
SO perfect for the way I'm feeling right at this moment(smile)...
its so nice to know a little heaven here on earth.
stalking you in contentedness,
your jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 03-31-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Beautifully written JM. You have such a way with the words that elude so many.
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 03-31-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Beautifully written, spoken, a lovely sound.

Love your title here...

~ Claire
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