this is excellent and poeticly beautiful...I was smiling as I read this, as I wrote a "poet tribute" a ways back and you and I used very similar words and imagery.
I guess "small poetic minds do think alike" (smile)
great job on this,
take care jm
she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.