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Peas and Carrots............as Forest Gump would say
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Peas and Carrots............as Forest Gump would say |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Peas and Carrots If I go tomorrow To Heaven’s heavenly gate God need not tell me That you and I were fate You’re my compass to reality My guardian angel here on earth Forgiving for things I have done From the moment of friendship’s birth Patient as Goliath strong Or so the story goes Your ears must tire to listen Of all of my woes Even in the labyrinth of life I know your trust never altered For it was I Who momentary faltered Let me just say I could not list all your merits But I am very proud To be peas and carrots Marina Mar 31/2000 |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
wonderful poem...bravo  "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely poem...isn't it nice to find a close friend. James |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marina, now are you going to get sentimental on us? If so, this poem was a good start. This was very nice Lady! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Nice poem Marina! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Blondie, thank you James, yes! Friends and family are the most important thing to me. Danny, don't worry. I promise you won't be needing the tissues for a while! Lizzie, thanks very much. Marina |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Peas and Carrots are so fine, but don't forget the glass of wine!! Very nice marina!!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, thank you so very much for posting this, from the bottom of my heart. Your friend, James  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Local Rebel, don't worry I don't leave home without it! James,there is no need to thank me...your post says it all. Marina |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Not what I was expecting by the title. Very nicely done, *applause* |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Local Rebel that was a very nice verse...and, well, that's all I got to say about that. Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I go tomorrow To Heaven’s heavenly gate God need not tell me That you and I were fate You’re my compass to reality My guardian angel here on earth Forgiving for things I have done From the moment of friendship’s birth -------------------------- this is so sweet and perfect... I love those stanza's above...they danced as i read them...very nice Marina take care, jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'll settle for peas and carrots anyday |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Mike thank very much. I'm glad you liked ir. JM,thanks again. Hoot,thank you....and me too! Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I hope nobody minds...I'm putting it back up for a friend, from over the weekend. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Now I'm the one that needs a kleenex Marina.. . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Don't peas and carrots grow on the same tree?..  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, don't worry I won't make you use antmore kleenex for awhile. Nan,I have no idea. In this case however, peas and carrots being a male and female I hope not.He He Marina |
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