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Fairmont Balcony
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Fairmont Balcony |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Fairmont Balcony In the haze of a fog-kissed morning, we stand on the edge of bliss, Safety and warmth lie to the rear; we need only retreat into the known, forsaking these whispered chances that say, "everything could start anew." Hanging in the blackness of this artificial light, we fear this final step; we doubt the subtle certainty of sun -- forget its unwavering power to burn through this haze and bear us on the thermals of our dreams. © RAM 5/6/99 |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful work, Ram. I like the first two lines. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful poetry, Rick! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice one Rick  |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Elizabeth, Denise and Hoot. Thanks. Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ram, Enjoyed the read, nice work. |
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