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This Vow I Make

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CherylLynnMckee
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0 posted 03-31-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CherylLynnMckee



From this day on..
I'll let you lead the way..
Be not my deciever..and lead me astray..
This leap of faith I give to you..
My loving benefactor..
I'll follow you in love..
From the beginning to the end..
This trust I give to you my friend..
From my days first breath..
To my last exhale of death..
Threw each and every test..
Forsaking all the rest..
As long as you can see me..and all my faint lines in between..
From all the reaches of my heart..
Every broken part..
This soul in disarray..
So many times betrayed..
I promise from this day..to let you lead the way..
I'll follow you threw our tomorrows..
Eluding regretts and sorrow..
Teach me to forgive..
Show me how to live..
Waistlands in my past..
Faith that didn't last..
Scriptures in the book..
So often overlooked..
A daunting task you undertake..
Took my thirsty heart..
Replenished it again..
Washed away my sins..
Found the beauty held within..
To these ends..
I am ready to begin..
I'll follow you in love..
Completely..all the way..
Each and every day..
From this moment on..
Forever and beyond..

 
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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 03-31-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

sounds like ready for the alter vows to me
very nice Cheryl

Rex}>{{{{o>
CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 03-31-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Thanks Rex...but be assured I am not headed for the alter by any stretch of the imagination..LOL

 
Butterflies_dont_cry
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CLM* Style, grace, beauty, devotion....all rolled into one breathtaking poem.  Thank you so much for sharing it with us.  I'm touched by the words and the message.
CherylLynnMckee
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4 posted 03-31-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Thank-you so much butterflies that means so much to me.

 
Tess
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5 posted 03-31-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

you have some lovely lines in here....
thirsty heart...soul in disarray

great poem  

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~


CherylLynnMckee
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6 posted 04-01-2000 02:29 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Thanks Tess I appreciate that..I have had this piece for along time..I only posted it at my sisters urging..I didnt think it was very good.

 
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 04-01-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"From all the reaches of my heart,From every broken part" came this heartfelt and touching poem.
Full of love and well done
Liz
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8 posted 04-01-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CherylLynn~
Lovely thoughts on display.

'From this moment on..
Forever and beyond..'

*Sighs* at the thought.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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This is beautiful, Cheryl!

Denise
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 04-01-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Cheryl....this is fabulous!!!!  Such heartfelt promises filled with hope of what could be.  Thank you for posting it!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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