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0 posted 03-31-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen of passion

Moments of Love

I try to bring out the best in you,
for truly I am the one,
blessed with your smile and your laugh,
us together, you warm me like the sun.

And if I could I would take moments,
such as these, and hold them in my heart,
and trace your lips and hear your voice,
us together, whenever we're apart.
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1 posted 03-31-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is just the sweetest poem! I love it! Thank you for sharing with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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2 posted 03-31-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! I like this....  
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3 posted 03-31-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Haven't seen you in a while! I like your poem here too.

Elizabeth


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Wow,what a nice poem.?I like it.!!!!!!!
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I like, I like alot!!! This was so very sweet and wonderful. Thanks for sharing!


AMY  

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6 posted 03-31-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Thank you all for your replies.  I was away for awhile reading Harry Potter books--but one night I stopped by and read some of the most wonderful poems, and I wondered why I left.  Thanks again.  You encourage me.
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Pen,
Sometimes simple is the most beautiful, I think it's true in this case...
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P.O.P~
Well, I'm glad you stopped by.
Hope you come back often.
Enjoyed this read and particularly this line
'us together, whenever we're apart.'
~*Marge*~


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Marge, I appreciate your reply because I love your work.  Actually I was unsure of "us together".  It seemed reduntant to me, but repetition is ubiquitous.  And then, there are some "us" not connected together.  So ...
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Short and sweet  
 
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