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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Moments of Love I try to bring out the best in you, for truly I am the one, blessed with your smile and your laugh, us together, you warm me like the sun. And if I could I would take moments, such as these, and hold them in my heart, and trace your lips and hear your voice, us together, whenever we're apart. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is just the sweetest poem! I love it! Thank you for sharing with us. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! I like this....  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Haven't seen you in a while! I like your poem here too. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,what a nice poem.?I like it.!!!!!!!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I like, I like alot!!! This was so very sweet and wonderful. Thanks for sharing! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Thank you all for your replies. I was away for awhile reading Harry Potter books--but one night I stopped by and read some of the most wonderful poems, and I wondered why I left. Thanks again. You encourage me. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Pen, Sometimes simple is the most beautiful, I think it's true in this case... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
P.O.P~ Well, I'm glad you stopped by. Hope you come back often. Enjoyed this read and particularly this line 'us together, whenever we're apart.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Marge, I appreciate your reply because I love your work. Actually I was unsure of "us together". It seemed reduntant to me, but repetition is ubiquitous. And then, there are some "us" not connected together. So ... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short and sweet |
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