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Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 03-31-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Why the Gods are against us
Iíll never know
But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes

To usurp the authority of natureís law
That is the key
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes

Such a contrast between light and dark
The only dream
Of which passes for reality
In time or so it seems
I felt like such a distant dream
As the starlight in your eyes

Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-31-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes
----------------
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes
----------------
Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes
---------------

oh man...this is exquisite...I love this jer, this is so perfect and graceful.
*SIGH*...yes... heres to fate and looking in your eyes...
stalking you contentedly
your jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
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Posts 2712
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2 posted 04-01-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi JML,

This is so good, I love some of the phases you used, I am going to have to remember them, Thank you,  very very nice.

Cerenity
hoot_owl_rn
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Starlight in your eyes...what a lovely line  
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4 posted 04-01-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML~
I certainly like what you do
with your thoughts.
*Sighing* at the content from your heart.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joannak
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5 posted 04-01-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joannak

Wonderful, JML.

I've been toying with trying a poem in French, and I was pleased to see your title.
Remarkable images you conjure up with your work here.

Joanna
Janet Marie
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6 posted 04-01-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Le lumiere d'etoile dans tes yeux

*sigh*...can you say my name in french...(smile)
just stopped in for seconds...I had a sudden craving for french food .
stalking you still,
your jm
gemini shadow
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7 posted 04-02-2000 11:49 AM       View Profile for gemini shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemini shadow

cette poeme est belle et ca de'note votre
exceptionnel talente.
vous es tre's cadeau.
respectueux vous l'admirateur,
clignoter Yeux  
gemini

†I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion


[This message has been edited by gemini shadow (edited 04-02-2000).]
Denise
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8 posted 04-02-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, JML!

Denise
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