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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Sing Sing a song of gladness; For, the morning, now, has dawned. The sun now bathes the world in light; The dark of night is gone. Earth's creatures all sing happily; Their voices loud and strong. Let man, with nature, raise his voice, In joy's unbroken song! Sing, now, of serenity; Of worries left behind. For, peace now soothes the aching heart, And calms the troubled mind. The fearsome spectre of despair Has vanished, in this hour. Come, revel in the morning light, And feel its healing power! Sing of dreams, unfettered; The soul set free to soar - To leave behind the bonds of earth, And touch the stars, once more. No longer shall the gentle heart Be bound by pain or fear. For, with the sun, fresh hope has dawned; A bright new day is here! -Troy J. Hoecherl- © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi hsystems, This is so beautiful, I enjoyed it so much thank you, and welcome to passions. Cerenity |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds like a nice song you speak of here. Sometime I will have to learn the melody. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful Troy! It made me feel like singing and dancing! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful melody of rhyme  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Troy~ I danced within your morning song Grabbed a note and just held on Sang it in the light of day Vanished all my cares away Thank you for your song of note I'm very glad that you wrote A melody that stays with me Filling my singing heart with glee ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
This is one of the most beautiful poms I have ever read..with out a doubt..I have a weakness for nature poems anyway..And this one is breathtaking! |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Cerenity...my pleasure! And, thanks for the welcome! "It's wonderful to be here; it's certainly a thrill. You're such a lovely audience..." OOPS! Sorry - the Beatles crept in there, and tried to upstage me, LOL! Elizabeth...it took me awhile to learn the melody, myself - I had to learn to listen to my heart and spirit. Thanks for your kind words!  Denise...feel free to join in, anytime! The world is one huge dance floor, and everyone's heart sings with perfect pitch! Hoot...thanks a bunch! Rhyme has always been my best medium, although I have also written some free-verse. Glad you enjoyed it! Marge...I am in awe! Thank you for your beautiful poem - it made my spirit soar! (Applause for Marge's gift) CherylLynnMckee...wow, thanks for the praise! Yeah, I'm a big nature-lover, too - lots of nature poems in my archives. You guys are the best - can't think of a better family to belong to! Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***hsystems, it is a fantastic feeling to feel oneself step out into the light after a period of darkness, however long. a fantstic piece...well done. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let the sun shine in I'm smiling...   |
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