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A few old poems

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pmc
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since 03-09-2000
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0 posted 03-31-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for pmc   Email pmc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pmc

Diana

I had no time to wonder why,
No farewell kiss or last goodbye,
So hush my darlings do not cry
For now at last in peace I lie,
Our times together were so few,
Those happy days I spent with you,
I tried my best I hope you see,
So now my sons please pray for me,
To all the causes that I loved,
To those I met, To those I hugged,
To the poor, the sick, the dying,
I'll  be there when you are crying.
The work we started must continue,
Please carry on I am still with you,
When times are hard please say a prayer
Think of me I am still there,
I was no saint, nor sinner too,
I always was just one of you,
And life must carry on the same,
Until in Gods grace we meet again.

Farewell.


Yvonne

Your twenty one and like the rest,
Have taken wing and flown the nest,
May this year for you fulfilment bring,
In life, in love, in everything,
And when the year draws to a close,
May your life blossom like a rose,
Then let us hear and look upon,
A happy smiling sweet Yvonne.


Peggy

When Christmas came around this year,
New stars and angels did appear,
The stars lit up the sky so bright,
I met an Angel in the night,
She came to me all on her own,
And had no one to walk her home,
With hair of gold and eyes of blue,
That Christmas Angel it was you.


pmc

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hsystems
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1 posted 03-31-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Wow, PMC!  Very nice poems, with great flow throughout...I especially like the first one.  Great job!

Troy


 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm
Cerenity
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2 posted 03-31-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi PMC,

Welcome to passions

I like these old poems very much, you show your passion well, look forward to more old poems.

Thank you,  Cerenity
Denise
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3 posted 03-31-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely heartfelt poems! Very nice!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 04-01-2000 10:04 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  
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5 posted 04-01-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PMC~
Lovely, all.

'Think of me I am still there'

Thank you, I needed this line today.
~*Marge*~




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pmc
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6 posted 04-01-2000 03:35 PM       View Profile for pmc   Email pmc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pmc

Troy, Cerenity, Denise, hoot_owl_rn, and Marge,
Thank you for your encouragement.

"Diana" I wrote not because I was a big Diana fan, I think she tried her best under difficult circumstances and would be the first to admit that she was no saint.

The last two poems were only ever read by the people they were written for and I thought I would air them once before confining them to history.

P.J.McFadden
CherylLynnMckee
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7 posted 04-01-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Lovely poems...wonderful writing..I think you captured Diana perfectly and accurately..Look forward to more.

 
Elizabeth
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8 posted 04-01-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a treat! I loved all of these, but the first one was my favorite. Thank you for sharing them. May I print a copy?

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Nan
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9 posted 04-02-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Old poems - New poems... Keep 'em coming - You've got talent...
pmc
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10 posted 04-03-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for pmc   Email pmc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pmc

Elizabeth You don't have to ask. By all means print a copy
CherylLynnMckee,  Nan and everyone else Thank you once more for your kind comments.
I was honestly surprised to receive so many replies.
There must be lots more of you with poetry from times past
Why not post it?

P.J.
Severn
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11 posted 04-03-2000 06:56 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Confining to history...?

Why ever would you want to do that?

There is some great work here - I really loved the last one.

 
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