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Open Poetry #6

It Seems I am Back

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-03-31 09:36 AM

IT SEEMS I AM BACK

Well i’m back,
What did you say?
I said I am back,
To what?

Come on, you know that special
place, that place that will never
completely let me go only I can
feel, see and understand.

This place I speak of contains such
beauty as a diamond cut to perfection
a rose to melt the heart, a child
over flowing in happiness, you could
say it’s a place of total harmony.

Oh, but don’t be fooled this place
has other things dwelling in it
as well.

What do you mean?

I mean it has so much more than
I would like to be there.

Pain beyond compare, sorrow
to be matched by nothing and
fear that can shake you to the
core. And don’t let me forget
the lack of understanding
of how to be happy.
The feeling of anger and loneliness.

This place is confusing, slipping in
out at will. I thinking i’m in charge
to just loose it again, gaining control
eludes me.

What is this place you speak of?

It’s hell, my minds eye.

By, Cerenity

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-04-01 10:22 AM

You are at Passions..and that is heaven!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-04-01 10:59 AM

Cerenity~
I heard they closed hell.
That only leaves Heaven
and Passion's.
Come to think of it ...
PoetdeVine's right,
they may be one and the same.

SMILE
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-04-01 11:51 AM

HI you two ladys,

Just some old stuff (poems), don't worrie Im still in bliss here at PASSIONS, but I did think it might be bad because it almost fell off into space thanks for finding it.

Cerenity

CherylLynnMckee
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 215

4 posted 2000-04-01 11:58 AM

I liked this poem very much..have felt that way a few times in my life..nicely done!

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