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It Seems I am Back

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Cerenity
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0 posted 03-31-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity


IT SEEMS I AM BACK


Well iím back,
What did you say?
I said I am back,
To what?

Come on, you know that special
place, that place that will never
completely let me go only I can
feel, see and understand.

This place I speak of contains such
beauty as a diamond cut to perfection
a rose to melt the heart, a child
over flowing in happiness, you could
say itís a place of total harmony.

Oh, but donít be fooled this place
has other things dwelling in it
as well.

What do you mean?

I mean it has so much more than
I would like to be there.

Pain beyond compare, sorrow
to be matched by nothing and
fear that can shake you to the
core. And donít let me forget
the lack of understanding
of how to be happy.
The feeling of anger and loneliness.


This place is confusing, slipping in
out at will. I thinking iím in charge
to just loose it again, gaining control
eludes me.

What is this place you speak of?

Itís hell, my minds eye.


By,  Cerenity

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1 posted 04-01-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You are at Passions..and that is heaven!  
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2 posted 04-01-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cerenity~
I heard they closed hell.
That only leaves Heaven
and Passion's.
Come to think of it ...
PoetdeVine's right,
they may be one and the same.

SMILE
~*Marge*~


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Cerenity
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3 posted 04-01-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

HI you two ladys,

Just some old stuff (poems), don't worrie Im still in bliss here at PASSIONS, but I did think it might be bad because it almost fell off into space thanks for finding it.

Cerenity
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4 posted 04-01-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

I liked this poem very much..have felt that way a few times in my life..nicely done!

 
 
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