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Seeing You with my Heart

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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0 posted 03-31-2000 06:05 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

  

Two worlds set apart
But so close in heart
I can't see your eyes
But there are no lies
I know you are real
your soul I can feel
No need to tell tales
Friendship never fails
Tell me about you
I know you'll be true
I'll not judge what's said
I'll no be mislead
So walk along free
Getting to know me
Listening, sharing
dreaming and caring
That's what friends are for
who could ask for more?


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 03-31-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wonderful writing...very warm and sincere...James
mete out
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2 posted 03-31-2000 06:16 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Butterflies,
This poem is so, so beautiful.
I'm not literate enough to put it into words.
You are amazing.   Wow.      


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


3 posted 03-31-2000 06:19 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a lovely poem, Butterflies. I can't say how I feel about it beacuse I don't know beautiful enough words to say it.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 03-31-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


JML*Thank you so much for reading and posting, your words mean so much.

Mete* & ESP* you two have me blushing...but all the credit goes to the one who created this within me...Thanks to Eagle   I'm glad you both enjoyed it. **Angel Wing Hugs**

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 03-31-2000).]
Janet Marie
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5 posted 03-31-2000 08:56 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Two worlds set apart
But so close in heart
I can't see your eyes
But there are no lies
I know you are real
your soul I can feel
No need to tell tales
Friendship never fails
------------------

butterfly...I LOVE this...
i love seeing this side of you.
what a perfect sweet poem of the heart.
and there is nothing like the feeling of a soulmate found...
your butterfly graphics are way cool girl!
like Butterfly kisses on every reply
take care, love ya, jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


6 posted 03-31-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

This poem was so nicely written~
You have a wonderful talent~
(I love your butterflies, too!)
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


7 posted 03-31-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Butterflies.....You have left me speechless with this one. The credit I think is yours, for you have such a talent and speak from the heart.
To be seen with the heart, no one could ever ask for more......
Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 03-31-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry



J.M.* You deserve Butterfly kisses my friend   This flowed alot easier than what I thought...lol I can write happy stuff...woooo hooooo.  Your turn...lol  

Marie* Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments  

Eagle*  You said alot for being speechless...lol    You inspired a new road for my poetry and for that I thank you!
vandana
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9 posted 03-31-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem!!!!!!!
 
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