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Lily B
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0 posted 2000-03-31 02:23 AM







"Glimpse of an Angel"







Leaning into the doorway,


She crosses her arms


And tips her head to one side.


She looks on in wonder,


With a smile


And a chest full of pride.


There is nothing so precious,


She's certain of this,


And no greater proof of His grace


Than the peaceful perfection


And heavenly glow


She sees in her sleeping child's face.






For my children, Taylor and Nicholas




 Pray not for a lighter load but for a stronger back....

© Copyright 2000 Julie A. Remke - All Rights Reserved
devina
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Cali
1 posted 2000-03-31 02:52 AM


This is a beautiful dedication to your children...good mothers always think this way..



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


ESP
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2 posted 2000-03-31 06:25 AM


This is such a sweet dedication. I can feel God working through you.

Love to you and your children,
Hugs,
Lizzie.

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3 posted 2000-03-31 07:10 AM


Lily~
Such loving thoughts
This sure brings back oodles of memories.
Mom's are like that ... yeah, we are.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lily B
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4 posted 2000-03-31 07:57 AM


Thank you, all, for your kind words and welcome!  I'm looking forward to reading, writing and sharing poetry with you...    

 Pray not for a lighter load but for a stronger back....

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
5 posted 2000-03-31 09:00 AM


Oh this was tender~
I believe every good mother feels this wonder~
You have written it so well~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard



Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-03-31 09:22 AM


Beautiful! I agree.  
Lily B
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7 posted 2000-03-31 05:32 PM


What a wonderful place this is....    

Thank you for your kindness!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 2000-03-31 05:37 PM




Lily B*  How wonderful!!!!  You have done every mother (and father) proud with this one and touched very familiar ground.  I was touched to the core.

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