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Take My Hand, Walk With Me. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 03-31-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Take my hand, love of my heart,
I've got the map, I know where to start
We start with two people, you and me
Where will we end up?
          We'll just have to wait and see

Walk with me, song of my soul
You make me complete, you make my life whole
Moving with me in harmony, life's gentle song
How long will this last?
          Hopefully, throughout my whole life long

Together we'll be, light of my life
You rescued my spirit, taken me away from this strife
Now that you're back in my life, I'll never let go
How much can I thank you?
          More my love, than you'll ever know.

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1 posted 03-31-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh Sven, you make us swoon...
this is a very sweet and romantic poem of dedication and promise...
just perfect for that songbird.  
take care, jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
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2 posted 03-31-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Ohh-- this was sweet~
I love this one~
Marie~


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And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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3 posted 03-31-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sven, your poetry lately has been so much like music...lyrical and sweet! This is very good!
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4 posted 03-31-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sven, you old softie, you. This is very touching....nice work.
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5 posted 03-31-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

You are such a darling man!  Melting hearts all over the forum...  (Just love the musical allusion, too...)  Sweetie-pie!
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6 posted 03-31-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

OK...I running out of kleenex boxes!!

Marina
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7 posted 04-02-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven....excellent words and emotion in this one.  Here is my hand...can we walk??  What do you say??  I am game if you are....

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8 posted 04-02-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sven I liked the thoughts and the style you used here.  The way you ask a question and than aswered it at the end of each paragraph.   James
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9 posted 04-02-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very romantic--I like the metaphors used in here.

Elizabeth


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10 posted 04-02-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Sven - nice work, Gentleman Poet!  Living proof that chivalry is not dead.


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11 posted 04-02-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

beautiful!

Corinne
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12 posted 04-02-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very lovely, Sven!

Denise
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13 posted 04-02-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

WOnderful words and feelings here Sven, anyone would be a fool not to take your offered hand!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
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14 posted 04-02-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Our incorrigible romantic at his best!!..
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15 posted 04-02-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
Your romantic heart is very much
on display in this render.
Very moving.
~*Marge*~


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