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Balladeer
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0 posted 03-31-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer


When we make love, the gates will open wide
To treasures I had never come to know
And I will live with happiness inside
Delighting in the richness of your glow.
When we make love, all pain will disappear
Erased by all the joy you make me feel.
Our day of blissful joy is drawing near
To taste the nectar our love will reveal.
When we make love, our hearts and souls will blend
As essences  now mingled into one.
Toward Heaven's path my spirit will ascend
To harvest golden apples of the sun.

Should fate decree we'll not taste passion's thrill
Rest easy knowing I will love you still.
© Copyright 2000 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-31-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, TOE !
*The devilette made me do it !
She did ! !
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 03-31-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is beautifully romantic, deer, and so full of love.  I love all you write, but this romatic stuff gets to me.  
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3 posted 03-31-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Oh my goodness...Oh m'dear Balladeer! now THIS, this, is FOREPLAY!

(And Marge is being naughty now!  See what you've done?)

Exquisite.
Janet Marie
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4 posted 03-31-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oooohhh, our sweet Balladeer has caught the spring fever thats blowing around in here.
and he is GLOWING with the passion fever.
this is so lovely...very tender and romantic.
another side of you to enjoy...
you devil you  
take care, jm

 she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.
matchbox20
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5 posted 03-31-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

So ... what books have you been reading ?

obviously from a part of the library that I've never been to

Rex}>{{{{o>
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6 posted 03-31-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Ladies (being Martie, Serenity and Janet Marie) I thank you ver much for your nice thoughts.

Marge....I think the deviled egg made you do it!! I've gotten several hands for my poems but never a toe!!



You crack me up!!!!!!!!
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7 posted 03-31-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It's in the back corner section, Rex, and you gotta be 18 or older!

devina
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8 posted 03-31-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I have to agree with my sis here...tis foreplay Deer...now to adult with you!!!LOL

Seriously- this is very sensuous and...well...just plain GOOD!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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9 posted 03-31-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Nobody does it better.... simply one of the best you've written.  
Nicole
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10 posted 03-31-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

     
EGAD man!  I think my heart just stopped!  Warning, lol...I need a warning before reading something this wonderful!
Michael
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11 posted 03-31-2000 03:52 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very romantic, Balladeer.  Wonderfully written piece.

Michael
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12 posted 03-31-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Balladeer,
You got me all choked up!

Beautiful.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


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13 posted 03-31-2000 08:51 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Flipping heck Bal...What were you thinking of?...ooops, don't answer that...hmmm

HUSG

ps: I think you should have kept the secret of when Deer meets Rainbow cause it's sure to explode the mind, I mean beat the time when the fox did...oooops..*g*

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 03-31-2000).]
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14 posted 03-31-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Be still this beating heart....what a lovely, romantic sonnet Balladeer. Wonderfully written  
RAM
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15 posted 03-31-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

well penned, for sure, Balladeer.  thanks for posting it.

Rick
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16 posted 03-31-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Beauty and pleasure in word and thought.

Wonderful writing, Balladeer.

~ Claire
Elizabeth Santos
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17 posted 03-31-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful sonnet
Beautiful thoughts
Liz
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18 posted 03-31-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Here I am, all choked up from reading such a beautiful poem... and wondering how I could respond when I simply wanted to keep reading.

And then... and then... and then along came Marge!!! LOL (I will expect her at my office by the close of business today to clean up the diet coke that shot out my nostrils! LOL)
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19 posted 03-31-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This really touched me--beautiful work! And just when I thought you couldn't get any better!

Marge...you naughty girl-just how much time HAVE you spent in Adult?  

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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You've made this gal's heart melt, Sir ....
This is too beautiful ....
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21 posted 03-31-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

How could she not, Balladder, how could she not.

Corinne
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22 posted 03-31-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Poetic friends, I thank you all for the encouragement. This may be the first sonnet I've ever written. It's that darned David2's fault for showing how beautifully the form can be used. Thank you again.

Rainbow....how your colors glow!  
doreen peri
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23 posted 03-31-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Sounds good go me... could we shoot a game of pool first? LOL

Seriously, Michael, this is lovely verse. You are so very talented.

doreen
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I was going to ask you if this was the first sonnet you had ever written, I didn't remember you ever posting any before. This is so beautiful, Balladeer. Ya done real good!! Write some more!

Denise
 
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