damn, this is exceptional, powerful
like a slap in the face
pure potent reality, but written with your gentle pain
this poem really effects me
i can relate to the perspective of all three people in this one,
take care, jm
she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough,
and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in.
...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me...
and I feel like somethings gonna give...
and I'm a little bit angry.