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I Believed in the Magic of a Moment

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Parker
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I Believed in the Magic of a Moment

I believed in the magic of a moment,
When it crossed the great divide
I believed in the touch of wonder
When I saw your lovely eyes.

You spoke to me in whispers
With a feeling, I canít describe,
And I longed to be your lover
This truth I wont deny

But, at this moment I have to wonder
Is magic just a fantasy ride,
And has the spell that Iíve come under
Lost its potions and started to die.

Will I ever know that flutter,
When your lips have just touched mine,
And will you ever be the lover,
I give all, just to here your sighs!

I believed in the magic of a moment,
And Iíll believe until I die ...


James Parker Haley   Mar 30, 2000




[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-30-2000).]
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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 03-30-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Been there, felt that.  Well said.
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2 posted 03-30-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Well said...lovely writing!

 
Corinne
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3 posted 03-30-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

this is lovely, Parker.

Corinne
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4 posted 03-30-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

This touched my heart big time! Love is a type of magic yes...but with the right person, it can be a lifetime thing. I hope you find yours  

AMY

P.S. Wonderful expressions here.

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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5 posted 03-30-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Very nice James.  I liked the simplity to it.

Marina
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6 posted 03-30-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Will I ever know that flutter,
When your lips have just touched mine,
And will you ever be the lover,
I give all, just to here your sighs!***

I believed in the magic of a moment,
And Iíll believe until I die ...

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*sigh* *sigh* *sigh*( do you think he hears them yet) (smile)
beautiful poem of devotion parker...
always believe in love...
take care,jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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7 posted 03-30-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Parker~
This is just lovely.
You speak with the verse
of romance.
~*Marge*~



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8 posted 03-30-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is quite a tender piece of writing, Parker. Longing can give us such a need for these answers, can it not?

I enjoyed this...

~ Claire
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9 posted 03-30-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

This is tender, beautiful, romantic, and filled with sweet longing~
Nicely written~
Marie~


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And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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10 posted 03-30-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lovely post Parker....the longing in it is evident
Parker
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11 posted 03-30-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Andrew, thank you we all have.

Cheryl, glad you liked.

Corinne, I believe in the moment. thank you.

AMY, thank you I hope so too.

Marina, thank you very much.

JM you sigh! very well. thank you, your sweet.

Marge my friend, its longing too. thanks.

Claire, too many questions, too many answers, not enough kissing. thanks...  

Marie, thank you.....

Hoot, I thought I hid the evidence deep....

Parker

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12 posted 03-31-2000 05:45 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Parker**
This is AMAZING!!  You have written with the pen of angels on this one and went straight to my heart...**sigh**
I believed in the magic of a moment,
And Iíll believe until I die ...
Words of a heart so true.....

Parker
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Butterflies, thank you, I believe I do.

Parker
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