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Revolution

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RAM
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0 posted 03-30-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RAM

              Revolution


The rhythm of my words is now a charm;
you forged it from the meaning of my needs.
You drive the rhythm of my compassed heart
and bridge the distances between its beats.

Come rhyme the mystic whispers of my thoughts;
complete in them the treasures not yet formed.
Breathe life into old misty, silent shrouds.
as our unjournaled days are richly born.

You match the rhythm of my lucky breaths.
You are the holder of my seasoned dreams.
You bring the rhythms of the world, and press
the richness of your own so mine is freed.

And, when our whispers mute the world with "now"
they'll spin it safely in tomorrow's vows.

  RAM  2/11/00

© Copyright 2000 RAM - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 03-30-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Serenely beautiful, RAM

Thank you for posting this.

Corinne
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Very beautiful  
CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 03-30-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

beautiful poem...excellent!

 
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 03-30-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

To say that this is a rhythmic treasure would be quite an understatement.

The rhythm of your words most definitely is a "charm."

Very well crafted work here!

~ Claire
Corinne
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5 posted 03-31-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

this one slid by too quickly, so back to the top with you!
RAM
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6 posted 03-31-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

Thank you, Corinne, and you're welcome.
Thank you Hoot, Cheryl, Claire.
and thanks for recycling me, Corinne.

renew, reuse, recycle    
 
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