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Marina
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0 posted 03-30-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina



The Veil


Your face haunts my dreams
a touch,  places me in a trance
eyes that forever hypnotize
for you my soul would bleed

I love you for who you are
and who I am when Iím with you
you make me laugh without a care
not knowing how or why

Feel my heart beat
I want you to understand
these things you never knew
were covered, with the veil


Marina Mar 3 2000


© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
CherylLynnMckee
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1 posted 03-30-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Beautiful poem...its not often we find someone we can be ourselves with and can open up to.

 
Local Rebel
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2 posted 03-30-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Hmmm... and this side of you is nice too... Very nice Marina
Mike
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Well done.  I enjoyed your poem.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very well written  
Marina
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5 posted 03-30-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Cheryl,thank you and yes your right.

Local Rebel, thank you....there is more to me then just....well you know.


Mike and Hoot, your compliments are very much appreciated.

Marina
Janet Marie
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I love you for who you are
and who I am when Iím with you
you make me laugh without a care
not knowing how or why

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*sigh*
unconditional love...it is the thing perfect poems are made of...this one is no exception.
beautiful poem of honest devotion Marina.
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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Marina,
       this is excellent. . . it's not often that we get to lift the veil and show who we really are. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Poet deVine
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8 posted 03-31-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Nicely done..I enjoyed this...
Rex Allen McCoy
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A beautiful poem you can be proud of Marina

Rex}>{{{{o>
Marina
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10 posted 03-31-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Jm,thank you as always.

Sven, yes that can be true.

Poet Devine, thank you your posts are always appricaited.

Rex, thank you very much for such a wonderful compliment.
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