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suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


0 posted 03-30-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

I laugh.
I dream.
I sing.
I scream.
Lonely
Heart yearns.
Mistake!
Love burns!
Offer
Belief,
Given
Deceit.
I ache.
I cry.
I hurt.
I die.
© Copyright 2000 suthern - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-30-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Suthern, this is so very sad. I'm sure we can all relate to this cycle. Well written.

Denise
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WOW!!!! Powerful grouping of words...so much said with so little  
Pepper
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3 posted 03-30-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Hugs suthern ...
Very powerful and sad, indeed .....
Nan
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4 posted 03-30-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Such is the essence of life, isn't it?
You've said it all, suthern..
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 03-30-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You sure did Mother Hen...you sure did..

Giving you a HUSG
Local Rebel
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6 posted 03-30-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

whats as incredible as this poignant poem suthern??? Cindy posted on it!!!

huggsZzzz to you both!!!
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This is a great poem..nicely done!

 
Pepper
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HUGS and HUSG ....  
Corazon
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ok you just forgot one line...."I hug" cause somewhere in that cycle you are gonna get some serious hugs from me....lol....maybe you could just repeat it every other line
hugs
hugs
hugs
and a couple more(penitent ones)*looks really really really  penitent so you won't be mad at her*
Corazon
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oh and I forgot a wow...great poem....I have never been able to write something that intense with so few words  

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Corinne
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Succinct style here, a departure for you.
And appropriate for the topic, too, I might add.

Nicely done!

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12 posted 03-30-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Little Chick: I'll moan more if you'll respond??? *G*

Thank you very much for your comments... I appreciate all of you taking the time to read this. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-30-2000).]
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Sweet Suthern ((((((HUGS))))))
You summed it up in so few words my dear. I hope this don't represent your present feelings?  Somehow I think they do, but I've been wrong before...if so, I'm sorry that you're feeling this way.
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Stop pedaling! Oh! Not that kind of cycle? I understand, I truly do. (throw something against the wall - it helps! As long as it's not the cat!)
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 03-31-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Suthern~
Nicely stated emotions.
But, let's kick that dying one ...
too permanent !  

You are amazing, lady !
~*Marge*~



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