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infinat3 sadn3ss
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0 posted 03-30-2000 09:05 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

will you ever know just how i feel ?
how much it hirts , to see you every day
and have to hide the emotions i yield
needles prodding and poking in every way

the only way i can express or vent this pain
is to write it in here
do you know who you are ?
to who my love remains year after year

and will you EVER know ?
should i tell you ?
should i let it show ?
i really dont know


 "all i wanna be , is washed out by the sea"
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Denise
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1 posted 03-30-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Writing, I think, is the best outlet for expression. Unrequited love can be very painful. You have expressed that very well!

Denise
mete out
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2 posted 03-31-2000 05:22 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Cable,
This really hurt me to read this so christ knows how bad you are feeling.
You are my best friend Cabes, and without you and Ryan, I would have fallen apart by now...all this and I still don't know what to say.
Your writing talent goes some way, I hope, to getting across your pain, and you never know, she might just know who she is...

Love you always, Lou  xxx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


ESP
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3 posted 03-31-2000 06:31 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

If she is meant to know who she is, she will know when the time is right. In the mean time, poetry is the one true expression of your soul until love comes to you, express everything through poetry and share it with your family here in Passions.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

infinat3 sadn3ss
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4 posted 04-03-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

i have re-posted this poem so, as she promised , my friend could read it .
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5 posted 04-14-2000 03:58 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Cabe, this poem is like your usual, it says loads, this is the principle that I work my whole life on, so chin up, and when life gets to much for you just let it all out, we'll all be here for you when you need it .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
mete out
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6 posted 05-08-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

cabey, you know i'm always hehe for you to talk to...

amazon_lover
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7 posted 05-09-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi!
More than asking should she know, ask why she shouldn't know. Love is a wonderful feeling and we needn't worry even it takes time.
I'll write something which I feel now.Love starts with a good friendship and even though love departs friendship remains for to be lovers you need to be good friends. So don't feel the pain and be sad. Be happy as you'll always have a good friend.

Sincerely
A_L
 
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