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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
will you ever know just how i feel ? how much it hirts , to see you every day and have to hide the emotions i yield needles prodding and poking in every way the only way i can express or vent this pain is to write it in here do you know who you are ? to who my love remains year after year and will you EVER know ? should i tell you ? should i let it show ? i really dont know "all i wanna be , is washed out by the sea" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Writing, I think, is the best outlet for expression. Unrequited love can be very painful. You have expressed that very well! Denise |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Cable, This really hurt me to read this so christ knows how bad you are feeling. You are my best friend Cabes, and without you and Ryan, I would have fallen apart by now...all this and I still don't know what to say. Your writing talent goes some way, I hope, to getting across your pain, and you never know, she might just know who she is... Love you always, Lou xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
If she is meant to know who she is, she will know when the time is right. In the mean time, poetry is the one true expression of your soul until love comes to you, express everything through poetry and share it with your family here in Passions. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
i have re-posted this poem so, as she promised , my friend could read it . |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cabe, this poem is like your usual, it says loads, this is the principle that I work my whole life on, so chin up, and when life gets to much for you just let it all out, we'll all be here for you when you need it . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
cabey, you know i'm always hehe for you to talk to... |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi! More than asking should she know, ask why she shouldn't know. Love is a wonderful feeling and we needn't worry even it takes time. I'll write something which I feel now.Love starts with a good friendship and even though love departs friendship remains for to be lovers you need to be good friends. So don't feel the pain and be sad. Be happy as you'll always have a good friend. Sincerely A_L |
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