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Cerenity
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Chase The Stars

My eyes did see you as a babe,
but a young man you are.
Across the many sunsets you have
come gaining strength and
wisdom for all to see.

Your challenges have been many,
you concord them all.
You placed gleam upon my eyes,
and laughter among my
breaths.

I wish a star for you to ride
and gale winds upon
your back, for I know you will
go far, and many trails
you will blaze.

I have not the strength to follow
you well, but upon my mind
you will always dwell. You can come
back to me with all of  your
tales to tell.

Keep your sights among the stars
for they shine brightest and
will take you far. My love will be
with you both day and night
and forever more my
only son.

By,  Cerenity

© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-30-2000 08:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Cerenity-1, this is soo beautiful, touched my heart.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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This is lovely and needs boosted back up here  
Denise
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This is so beautiful, Cerenity!

Denise
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4 posted 03-30-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cerenity~
Awwwwwwwwwwww!
What a tender mom's heart talking.
Really enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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Cerenity
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Hi every one,

Thank you so much for your loving replys,
Yes the heart is feeling some emotion right know. My son just moved out of the house and got a job. All of a sudden im feeling a loss even though I know this is the natural way of things, and of course all of this stuff like what happend in his life comes back at times like this. He's a good boy though and I am proud of him.

Cerenity
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6 posted 03-30-2000 08:25 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Very nice Cerenity.

Marina
 
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