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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-03-30 08:32 AM



Chase The Stars

My eyes did see you as a babe,
but a young man you are.
Across the many sunsets you have
come gaining strength and
wisdom for all to see.

Your challenges have been many,
you concord them all.
You placed gleam upon my eyes,
and laughter among my
breaths.

I wish a star for you to ride
and gale winds upon
your back, for I know you will
go far, and many trails
you will blaze.

I have not the strength to follow
you well, but upon my mind
you will always dwell. You can come
back to me with all of  your
tales to tell.

Keep your sights among the stars
for they shine brightest and
will take you far. My love will be
with you both day and night
and forever more my
only son.

By,  Cerenity


© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-03-30 08:47 AM


Cerenity-1, this is soo beautiful, touched my heart.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-03-30 10:23 AM


This is lovely and needs boosted back up here  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-03-30 11:01 AM


This is so beautiful, Cerenity!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-03-30 02:24 PM


Cerenity~
Awwwwwwwwwwww!
What a tender mom's heart talking.
Really enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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Cerenity
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Escondido-California
5 posted 2000-03-30 08:05 PM


Hi every one,

Thank you so much for your loving replys,
Yes the heart is feeling some emotion right know. My son just moved out of the house and got a job. All of a sudden im feeling a loss even though I know this is the natural way of things, and of course all of this stuff like what happend in his life comes back at times like this. He's a good boy though and I am proud of him.

Cerenity

Marina
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6 posted 2000-03-30 08:25 PM


Very nice Cerenity.

Marina

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