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Rainbows/halo like
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Rainbows/halo like Look see there, up above La Luna smiling down she indeed is….. for her glow surrounds only you, forming an aura projecting crystal rainbows halo - like moonbeams floating, playfully dipping, you fade and ripples appear over and over Oh dear it was only my imagination, cemented upon these still waters calm, it was me lost in You. Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, Good morning, This is beautiful, La Luna smiling down that is neet I haven't heard that before. Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very tranquil  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is so beautiful!! I could picture it in my mind! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! I love the way you tied that up at the end....  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is beautiful. Glad I went thumbing through the back pages. I like the formatting. Very, very well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Angel, I feel like I am there!! Beautiful images and I just love the way you layed it out. Excellent... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Have you ever seen those rainbows round the moon Playful little rays Shining round La Luna in June? Bountiful in color Shining just for you And imitating a smile and the sweet things that you do. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
 Wonderful! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cerenity, thanks hon -------------- thanks Ruth honey -------------- Denise thank you so very much -------------- Sharon thank you Hon -------------- Oh marge thank you so very much -------------- Thank you so much Lone Wolf -------------- Oh Angel, your poem is so beautiful and so very thoughtful of you sweetheart. Thank you so very much. -------------- Kamla Thanks Hon What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
 Anytime Angel |
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