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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-30-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Rainbows/halo like

Look
see there,
   up above
La Luna
  smiling down

she indeed is…..
   for her glow
surrounds only
      you, forming
an aura
projecting crystal
       rainbows
halo - like

moonbeams
floating, playfully
    dipping, you
fade and ripples
      appear over
and over

       Oh dear
    it was only
my imagination,
cemented upon these
still waters calm, it
           was me
      lost in
You.


Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Cerenity
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1 posted 03-30-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Dark Angel,

Good morning, This is beautiful, La Luna smiling down that is neet I haven't heard that before.

Cerenity
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Very tranquil  
Denise
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Ahhh, this is so beautiful!! I could picture it in my mind!

Denise
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4 posted 03-31-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful! I love the way you tied that up at the end....  
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5 posted 04-01-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This is beautiful.
Glad I went thumbing through
the back pages.
I like the formatting.
Very, very well done.
~*Marge*~


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Angel,
I feel like I am there!!  Beautiful images and I just love the way you layed it out.  Excellent...

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Have you ever seen
those rainbows round the moon
Playful little rays
Shining round La Luna in June?

Bountiful in color
Shining just for you
And imitating a smile
and the sweet things that you do.
Severn
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Wonderful!
Dark Angel
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Cerenity, thanks hon  
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thanks Ruth honey  
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Denise thank you so very much  
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Sharon thank you Hon  
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Oh marge thank you so very much  
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Thank you so much Lone Wolf  
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Oh Angel, your poem is so beautiful and so very thoughtful of you sweetheart. Thank you so very much.  
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                 Kamla Thanks Hon



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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