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What Will Then Remain?

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John Yaws
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0 posted 03-29-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

Cold upon my heart they lay-
Those memories of you..
It seems they will not go away,
No matter what I do.
Your gentle touch, the sweet caress-
That look, within your eye…
Yet how could either of us guess-
What just ahead might lie?
Sorrow? Loneliness, and shame?
Why! all of these and more…
And who can say just who’s to blame?
And who can whom abhor?
“I love you”..Ah, ‘tis easy said-
But harder far to keep…
And when those feelings soon are dead
How hard we tend to weep.
The question still an answer begs-
After all the pain…
Is washed away by sorrows tears…
Oh, what will then remain?




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Corinne
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1 posted 03-30-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

how sad and sweet...
ya know?

So much love there, seems to me, all hope is not yet lost...

But, that could be...
just the poet in me.

Corinne
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2 posted 03-30-2000 03:11 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is pure poetry, Gunslinger, tender and touching...speaking for the heart of a woman, I am moved by this...thanx...
tracie66
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3 posted 03-30-2000 03:41 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Gunslinger
Very touching
Tracie


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JamesMichael
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4 posted 03-30-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice gunslinger...another opportunity to love can sometimes end in disappointments and sorrow.  James
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5 posted 03-30-2000 07:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Slinger~
You pen from within.
Longing render of regrets.
Wonderful, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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GS...very nicely done poem  
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7 posted 03-30-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very touching, heartfelt poem!

Denise
 
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