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Laughing On The Floor Dying (Thanks to doreen peri)

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 03-29-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Laughing On The Floor Dying

My friend doreen peri had me laughing on the floor dying
never could I imagine laughter so intense I'd be crying
a funny poem she wrote weaving me in laughter dying
which in return will keep these men in her mailbox flying

Yesterday miss peri planted on me a never ending smile
I've known this lady as a loyal friend a very long while
today like an old telephone her ability to create I dial
as she exhibited hilariousness in her very amazing style

I still can't venture into it seriously as I've so been trying
everytime silly laughter's rolling me on the floor dying
now forever and a day I shall in happiness be sighing
as I continue searching in gleefulness never any denying

With ten pictured men a day soon a bedroom wall to tile
or in a little corner a mountain of possibilities to file
she thinks I'm crazy sending her these men in a pile
yet one day in futures eye she'll decide to go the extra mile
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This is delightful, Gloria!  

Denise
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So YOU were the culprit!!! Very cute..  
doreen peri
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3 posted 03-29-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

G-4 ME?

Today I met Mister Perfect.
He was my delight, it's true!
He came to my front door, you see,
a Dream for all I do!

He plays my favorite music-
keeps me company in a dark room!
He takes me on trips
to the places he picks...
and makes my ideas bloom!

He is FAST talkin', world walkin'
silver-grey stud
with a gorgeous, sleek body and style!
He's a writer, an artist, a chef, movie buff--
A photographer, tres versatile!

Now Eden's sweet apple's been bitten 'longside
of my new love- I'll never turn back!
He will be my companion for several years hence...

Oh DAMN! I LOVE MY brand new MAC!!




-hehehe.... cute poem, gloria...thanks for the new men in my mailbox... I especially thought the one that looked like he was a mass murderer on qualudes was interesting... LOL... seriously, m'friend.... I DO appreciate your concern for my new single life and y'neva know, y'know!? For now, I'm enjoying Mac... one day I might want another New Toy, tho... hehe
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You spread the laugher Gloria! Thanks for lettin us in on it  
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Hey!!! What's not to enjoy about a MAC !!!!


doreen peri
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6 posted 03-30-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

hahahahahahaha



Michael, Michael, Michael... what am I going to do with you? LOL

I'm writing double entendres! LOL... who woulda thought?

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Doreen's got a new MAC??
I sure hope it's a BIG'n!!!






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-30-2000).]
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ROFL....who needs cupid when passions has you   Still reviewing all the men that suddenly appeared in my mail  
 
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