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ken
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0 posted 03-29-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for ken   Email ken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ken's Home Page   View IP for ken

The anger Iím feeling is so intense
The veins in my head are pulsating
Overcome by rage, I cannot even speak
Restraining myself from retaliation
I try to walk away, but to no avail
With fixed eyes and clenched fists
I lung into him with fire and brimstone
My hatred venting out inducing pain
With each strike, my anger increases
Once finished, I walk away
No remorse for the act Iíve just committed
For vengeance was mine

Ken

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hsystems
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1 posted 03-29-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Ken...boy, what a powerful poem!  Excellent expression in your words.  Great job!

Troy


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mete out
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2 posted 03-30-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***ken,
Wow!        
This poem certainly knocks a hard punch!
Absolutely fantastic use of language here.
That's gonna have me reeling for days!
Well done.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


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